Date: Thu, 21 Feb 2008 07:59:44 GMT From: gregory delfly <gregoryd.freebsd@free.fr> To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/120925: handbook: typos Message-ID: <200802210759.m1L7xiMn082642@www.freebsd.org> Resent-Message-ID: <200802210810.m1L8A1GH019268@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 120925
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: handbook: typos
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Thu Feb 21 08:10:01 UTC 2008
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: gregory delfly
>Release: 6.3R
>Organization:
>Environment:
>Description:
In the "printing" chapter of the handbook, I saw one word which might be lacking (proper English asks for "in addition to", imho).
Also, there is a "." inside of a <quote>, which is not the usage (in docs).
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
I made a patch correcting those, which is to be applied to "chapter.smgl" in /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/
Patch attached with submission follows:
--- chapter.sgml.old 2008-02-21 08:51:36.000000000 +0100
+++ chapter.sgml 2008-02-21 08:52:26.000000000 +0100
@@ -2915,7 +2915,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>Accessing a printer attached directly to a network. The
- printer has a network interface in addition (or in place of) a
+ printer has a network interface in addition to (or in place of) a
more conventional serial or parallel interface. Such a printer
might work as follows:</para>
@@ -3547,7 +3547,7 @@
printers. Like disk quotas, the accounting is immediate. You can
prevent users from printing when their account goes in the red,
and might provide a way for users to check and adjust their
- <quote>print quotas.</quote> But this method requires some database
+ <quote>print quotas</quote>. But this method requires some database
code to track users and their quotas.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
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