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Date:      Thu, 2 Oct 2008 19:52:55 GMT
From:      Rene Ladan <rene@FreeBSD.org>
To:        Perforce Change Reviews <perforce@FreeBSD.org>
Subject:   PERFORCE change 150813 for review
Message-ID:  <200810021952.m92JqtAt012925@repoman.freebsd.org>

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Change 150813 by rene@rene_self on 2008/10/02 19:52:40

	Fix some nits in revision 1.73 of the MAC chapter, propagate the changes to the Dutch version where applicable.
	Checked build (nl + en).

Affected files ...

.. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac/chapter.sgml#5 edit
.. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/nl_NL.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac/chapter.sgml#9 edit

Differences ...

==== //depot/projects/docproj_nl/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac/chapter.sgml#5 (text+ko) ====

@@ -700,7 +700,7 @@
 	implement the labeling feature, including the Biba, Lomac,
 	<acronym>MLS</acronym> and <acronym>SEBSD</acronym>
 	policies.</para>
-    
+
       <para>In many cases, the <option>multilabel</option> may not need
 	to be set at all.  Consider the following situation and
 	security model:</para>
@@ -967,12 +967,6 @@
 
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ugidfw add subject not uid root new object not uid root mode n</userinput></screen>
 
-      <note>
-	<para>In releases prior to &os;&nbsp;5.3, the
-	  <parameter>add</parameter> parameter did not exist.  In those
-	  cases the <parameter>set</parameter> should be used
-	  instead.  See below for a command example.</para></note>
-
       <para>This is a very bad idea as it will block all users from
 	issuing even the most simple commands, such as
 	<command>ls</command>.  A more patriotic list of rules
@@ -1427,6 +1421,7 @@
 	company information, and financial institution environments.
 	The most unlikely place would be a personal workstation with
 	only two or three users.</para>
+    </sect2>
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1 id="mac-biba">
@@ -1552,7 +1547,7 @@
 	to.</para>
 
       <para>The &man.mac.biba.4; security policy module permits an
- 	administrator to address which files and programs a user or
+	administrator to address which files and programs a user or
 	users may see and invoke while assuring that the programs and
 	files are free from threats and trusted by the system for that
 	user, or group of users.</para>
@@ -1570,7 +1565,7 @@
 	utilities.  While other users would be grouped into other
 	categories such as testers, designers, or just ordinary
 	users and would only be permitted read access.</para>
-	
+
       <para>With its natural security control, a lower integrity subject
 	is unable to write to a higher integrity subject; a higher
 	integrity subject cannot observe or read a lower integrity
@@ -1733,7 +1728,7 @@
 	<username>www</username> users into the insecure class:</para>
 
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pw usermod nagios -L insecure</userinput></screen>
-      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pw usermod www -L insecure</userinput></screen>      
+      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pw usermod www -L insecure</userinput></screen>
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2>
@@ -1887,7 +1882,7 @@
       &man.mac.seeotheruids.4; could co-exist and block access not
       only to system objects but to hide user processes as well.
 
-    <para>Begin by adding the following lines to
+    <para>Begin by adding the following line to
       <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename>:</para>
 
     <programlisting>mac_seeotheruids_enabled="YES"</programlisting>
@@ -2032,9 +2027,10 @@
     <sect2>
       <title>Error: &man..secure.path.3; cannot stat <filename>.login_conf</filename></title>
 
-      <para>When I attempt to switch from the <username>root</username>
+      <para>When I attempt to switch from the <username>root</username> user
 	to another user in the system, the error message
-	<errorname>_secure_path: unable to state .login_conf</errorname>.</para>
+	<errorname>_secure_path: unable to state .login_conf</errorname>
+	appears.</para>
 
       <para>This message is usually shown when the user has a higher
 	label setting then that of the user whom they are attempting to

==== //depot/projects/docproj_nl/nl_NL.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac/chapter.sgml#9 (text+ko) ====

@@ -1066,13 +1066,6 @@
 
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ugidfw add subject not uid root new object not uid root mode n</userinput></screen>
 
-      <note><!--(rene) dit verwijderen, ook in en_US versie (1.73, regel 970)-->
-	<para>In versies voor &os;&nbsp;5.3 bestond de parameter
-	  <parameter>add</parameter> niet.  In die gevallen dient in
-	  plaats daarvan <parameter>set</parameter> gebruikt te worden
-	  als in het onderstaande voorbeeld.</para>
-      </note>
-
       <para>Dit is een slecht idee, omdat het voorkomt dat alle
 	gebruikers ook maar het meest eenvoudige commando kunnen
 	uitvoeren, zoals <command>ls</command>.  Een betere lijst met
@@ -1534,7 +1527,7 @@
 	instellingen zijn.  De meest onwaarschijnlijke plaats zou een
 	persoonlijk werkstation met slechts twee of drie gebruikers
 	zijn.</para>
-    </sect2> <!--(rene) ontbreekt in en_US 1.73 ?-->
+    </sect2>
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1 id="mac-biba">
@@ -1865,7 +1858,7 @@
 /dev                            biba/equal
 /dev/*                          biba/equal
 
-/var                            biba/equal <!--(rene) ws-fout in en_US 1.73 ?-->
+/var                            biba/equal
 /var/spool                      biba/equal
 /var/spool/*                    biba/equal
 
@@ -1999,8 +1992,8 @@
       met &man.mac.seeotheruids.4; naast elkaar bestaan en zowel toegang
       tot systeemobjecten als tot gebruikersprocessen ontzeggen.</para>
 
-    <para>Begin door de volgende regels aan
-      <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename> toe te voegen:</para><!--(rene) dit is maar 1 regel? en_US 1.73 -->
+    <para>Begin door de volgende regel aan
+      <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename> toe te voegen:</para>
 
     <programlisting>mac_seeotheruids_enabled="YES"</programlisting>
 
@@ -2142,7 +2135,7 @@
 
       <para>Bij het wisselen van <username>root</username> naar een
 	andere gebruiker in het systeem, verschijnt de foutmelding
-	<errorname>_secure_path: unable to state .login_conf</errorname>.</para><!--(rene) Engelse tekst klopt niet 1.73-->
+	<errorname>_secure_path: unable to state .login_conf</errorname>.</para>
 
       <para>Deze melding komt meestal voor als de gebruiker een hogere
 	labelinstelling heeft dan de gebruiker waarnaar wordt



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