Date: Sun, 27 Jan 2002 12:49:21 +0100 (CET) From: Martin Heinen <martin@sumuk.de> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Subject: docs/34328: [PATCH] minor corrections to chapter kernelconfig Message-ID: <200201271149.g0RBnLM38583@sumuk.de>
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>Number: 34328
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: [PATCH] minor corrections to chapter kernelconfig
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Sun Jan 27 03:50:01 PST 2002
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Martin Heinen
>Release: FreeBSD 4.4-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD Moses.earth.sol 4.4-STABLE FreeBSD 4.4-STABLE #0: Sat Dec 22 07:35:30 CET 2001 toor@Moses.earth.sol:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/MOSES i386
>Description:
removed a blank,
removed <filename> from <userinput> line,
marked up root with <username>,
put 'ee', 'make world' inside <command>,
added missing periods,
made Star Office an application,
marked up enter with <keycap>
>How-To-Repeat:
read the kernelconfig chapter
>Fix:
Index: chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /u/cvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/kernelconfig/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.73
diff -u -r1.73 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml 26 Jan 2002 00:20:31 -0000 1.73
+++ chapter.sgml 26 Jan 2002 17:15:30 -0000
@@ -162,10 +162,10 @@
<literal>src</literal>, then <literal>sys</literal>. If you
have an aversion to <application>sysinstall</application> and
you have access to an <quote>official</quote> FreeBSD CDROM, then
- you can also install the source from the command line :</para>
+ you can also install the source from the command line:</para>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>mount</userinput> /cdrom
-&prompt.root; <userinput>mkdir -p</userinput> <filename>/usr/src/sys</filename>
+&prompt.root; <userinput>mkdir -p</userinput> /usr/src/sys
&prompt.root; <userinput>ln -s</userinput> /usr/src/sys /sys
&prompt.root; <userinput>cat /cdrom/sys/ssys.[a-d]* | tar -xzvf</userinput></screen>
</note>
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@
<note>
<para>You must execute these and all of the following commands under
- the root account or you will get <errortype>permission
+ the <username>root</username> account or you will get <errortype>permission
denied</errortype> errors.</para>
</note>
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@
will probably be <command>vi</command>, which is too complex to
explain here, but is covered well in many books in the <link
linkend="bibliography">bibliography</link>. However, FreeBSD does
- offer an easier editor called <quote>ee</quote> which, if you are a
+ offer an easier editor called <command>ee</command> which, if you are a
beginner, should be your editor of choice. Feel free to change the
comment lines at the top to reflect your configuration or the
changes you have made to differentiate it from
@@ -256,7 +256,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>If you are running a FreeBSD version prior to 4.0, and you are
<emphasis>not</emphasis> upgrading to FreeBSD 4.0 or higher using
- the <quote>make world</quote> procedure, use procedure 1.</para>
+ the <command>make world</command> procedure, use procedure 1.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -266,8 +266,8 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>If you are rebuilding the kernel as part of a <quote>make
- world</quote> process, use procedure 2.</para>
+ <para>If you are rebuilding the kernel as part of a <command>make
+ world</command> process, use procedure 2.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
@@ -305,7 +305,7 @@
way</title>
<step>
- <para>Change to the <filename>/usr/src</filename> directory</para>
+ <para>Change to the <filename>/usr/src</filename> directory.</para>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/src</userinput></screen>
</step>
@@ -327,7 +327,7 @@
<para>In FreeBSD 4.2 and older you must replace
<literal>KERNCONF=</literal> with <literal>KERNEL=</literal>.
4.2-STABLE that was fetched after Feb 2nd, 2001 does
- recognize <literal>KERNCONF=</literal></para>
+ recognize <literal>KERNCONF=</literal>.</para>
</note>
<indexterm>
@@ -737,8 +737,8 @@
options _KPOSIX_PRIORITY_SCHEDULING</programlisting>
<para>Real-time extensions added in the 1993 POSIX. Certain
- applications in the ports collection use these (such as Star
- Office).</para>
+ applications in the ports collection use these (such as <application>Star
+ Office</application>).</para>
<indexterm>
<primary>kernel options</primary>
@@ -1021,7 +1021,7 @@
<literal>device miibus</literal> to the kernel config pulls in
support for the generic miibus API and all of the PHY drivers,
including a generic one for PHYs that are not specifically handled
- by an individual driver</para>
+ by an individual driver.</para>
<programlisting>device dc # DEC/Intel 21143 and various workalikes
device rl # RealTek 8129/8139
@@ -1303,7 +1303,7 @@
an excellent mechanism for recovering from incompatible
kernels. Simply choose the kernel you want to boot from at
the FreeBSD boot loader. You can access this when the system
- counts down from 10. Hit any key except for the enter key,
+ counts down from 10. Hit any key except for <keycap>Enter</keycap>,
type <command>unload</command> and then type
<command>boot
<replaceable>kernel.old</replaceable></command>, or the
@@ -1381,4 +1381,3 @@
sgml-parent-document: ("../book.sgml" "part" "chapter")
End:
-->
-
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