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Date:      Tue, 7 Nov 2006 20:26:23 +0100
From:      Daniel Gerzo <gerzo@micronet.sk>
To:        Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net>
Cc:        Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>, Daniel Gerzo <danger@FreeBSD.org>, doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org
Subject:   Re[2]: cvs commit: www/en about.sgml
Message-ID:  <1649333148.20061107202623@micronet.sk>
In-Reply-To: <20061107185552.GD83597@submonkey.net>
References:  <200611071654.kA7GsWbj097708@repoman.freebsd.org> <20061107185552.GD83597@submonkey.net>

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Hello Ceri,

Tuesday, November 7, 2006, 7:55:52 PM, you wrote:


>> | @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
>> |                     including CD-ROM, DVD-ROM, floppy disk, magnetic tape,
>> |                     an MS-DOS&reg; partition, or if you have a network
>> |                     connection, you can install it <i>directly</i> over
>> | -                   anonymous FTP or NFS. All you need is
>> | +                   anonymous FTP or NFS.  All you need are
>> |                     <a
>> |                       href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install.html">these
>> |                     directions</a>.</p>

> This change isn't correct - "these directions" is the object of this
> sentence and the verb "is" should agree with the subject "all you need",
> which is singular.

Tom said it's correct with "are", Cc:-ing him.

> See sections 5.23 and 5.24 of the CMS.

> Ceri

-- 
Best regards,
 Daniel                            mailto:gerzo@micronet.sk




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