Date: Sat, 23 Dec 2017 01:19:43 +0000 (UTC) From: Eitan Adler <eadler@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r51332 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview Message-ID: <201712230119.vBN1JhvF049068@repo.freebsd.org>
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Author: eadler Date: Sat Dec 23 01:19:43 2017 New Revision: 51332 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/51332 Log: FDP Primer: add missing word; pet igor PR: 224531 Submitted by: ljuba.bsd@gmail.com Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml Fri Dec 22 19:44:54 2017 (r51331) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml Sat Dec 23 01:19:43 2017 (r51332) @@ -74,8 +74,8 @@ documentation. First, subscribe to the &a.doc;. Some team members also interact on the <literal>#bsddocs</literal> <acronym>IRC</acronym> channel on - <link xlink:href="http://www.efnet.org/">EFnet</link>. These people - can help with questions or problems involving the + <link xlink:href="http://www.efnet.org/">EFnet</link>. These + people can help with questions or problems involving the documentation.</para> <procedure> @@ -86,9 +86,10 @@ This meta-package installs all of the software needed to edit and build &os; documentation. The <application>Subversion</application> package is needed to - obtain a working of the documentation and generate patches with.</para> + obtain a working copy of the documentation and generate + patches with.</para> - <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg install docproj subversion</userinput></screen> + <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg install docproj subversion</userinput></screen> </step> <step> @@ -222,7 +223,9 @@ <listitem> <para><emphasis>Web site</emphasis>: This is the main &os; - presence on the web, visible at <link xlink:href="https://www.freebsd.org/index.html">https://www.FreeBSD.org/</link>; + presence on the web, visible at <link + xlink:href="https://www.freebsd.org/index.html">; + https://www.FreeBSD.org/</link>; and many mirrors around the world. The web site is typically a new user's first exposure to &os;.</para> </listitem> @@ -243,11 +246,13 @@ <para>Documentation commit messages are visible with <command>svn log</command>. Commit messages are also - archived at <uri xlink:href="&a.svn-doc-all.url;">&a.svn-doc-all.url;</uri>.</para> + archived at <uri xlink:href="&a.svn-doc-all.url;"> + &a.svn-doc-all.url;</uri>.</para> - <para>Web frontends to both of these repositories are available at <link - xlink:href="https://svnweb.FreeBSD.org/doc/"></link>; and <link - xlink:href="https://svnweb.FreeBSD.org/base/"></link>.</para>; + <para>Web frontends to both of these repositories are available + at <link xlink:href="https://svnweb.FreeBSD.org/doc/"></link>; + and <link + xlink:href="https://svnweb.FreeBSD.org/base/"></link>.</para>; <para>Many people have written tutorials or how-to articles about &os;. Some are stored as part of the <acronym>FDP</acronym>
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