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Date:      Mon, 22 Sep 2014 20:04:59 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Christian Brueffer <brueffer@FreeBSD.org>
To:        src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable-10@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r271997 - stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes
Message-ID:  <201409222004.s8MK4x3j090649@svn.freebsd.org>

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Author: brueffer
Date: Mon Sep 22 20:04:59 2014
New Revision: 271997
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/271997

Log:
  Spelling, grammar and punctuation fixes.
  
  Approved by:	re (gjb)

Modified:
  stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml

Modified: stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml	Mon Sep 22 19:56:21 2014	(r271996)
+++ stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml	Mon Sep 22 20:04:59 2014	(r271997)
@@ -624,7 +624,7 @@
 	<para contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&ix;">Kernel RPC code, which
 	  is a base of NFS server took multiple optimizations, that
 	  significantly improved its performance and
-	  <acronym>SMP</acronym> scapability.</para>
+	  <acronym>SMP</acronym> scalability.</para>
 
 	<para revision="269065" contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&ff;">The
 	  <acronym>iSCSI</acronym> initiator has been updated to
@@ -840,7 +840,7 @@
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para revision="269298">The maximum number of
 	      <acronym>SCSI</acronym> ports increased from 32 to
-	      128</para>
+	      128.</para>
 	  </listitem>
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para revision="269429">Improved <literal>zvol</literal>
@@ -867,7 +867,7 @@
 	  this can easily double &man.zfs.8; performance or reduce CPU
 	  usage in half.  It was originally disabled due to memory and
 	  <acronym>KVA</acronym> exhaustion problem reports, which
-	  should be resolved due to several change in the VM
+	  should be resolved due to several changes in the VM
 	  subsystem.</para>
 
 	<para revision="260178" contrib="vendor"
@@ -995,7 +995,7 @@
 	prints the output in a parsable format.</para>
 
       <para revision="263783">The Blowfish password format
-	implementation updated.  Support for &dollar;2b&dollar; has
+	implementation has been updated.  Support for &dollar;2b&dollar; has
 	been added, allowing use of passwords greater than 256
 	characters long.</para>
 



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