Date: Fri, 22 Dec 2017 23:35:18 -0600 From: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> To: Eitan Adler <eadler@freebsd.org> Cc: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r51330 - in head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs: ipv6 multimedia portmgr Message-ID: <20171223053518.GW39477@kduck.kaduk.org> In-Reply-To: <CAF6rxg=ZB6ALMv%2BdRuFkX01sdf4hOx96Ys1ADshpBiQJiLinyQ@mail.gmail.com> References: <201712221748.vBMHmiUt059300@repo.freebsd.org> <20171223042430.GV39477@kduck.kaduk.org> <CAF6rxg=ZB6ALMv%2BdRuFkX01sdf4hOx96Ys1ADshpBiQJiLinyQ@mail.gmail.com>
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On Fri, Dec 22, 2017 at 08:43:22PM -0800, Eitan Adler wrote: > On 22 December 2017 at 20:24, Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> wrote: > > On Fri, Dec 22, 2017 at 05:48:44PM +0000, Eitan Adler wrote: > >> Author: eadler > >> Date: Fri Dec 22 17:48:44 2017 > >> New Revision: 51330 > >> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/51330 > >> > >> Log: > >> multiple: fix a few typos > >> > >> - Duplicate words > >> - change -> chance > >> - insure -> ensure (this is actually an Americanism, but can confuse > >> some people) > >> > >> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml > >> ============================================================================== > >> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml Fri Dec 22 14:48:00 2017 (r51329) > >> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml Fri Dec 22 17:48:44 2017 (r51330) > >> @@ -13072,7 +13072,7 @@ > >> on the system. One of the first problems presented > >> to the person who wants to tune the scheduler is > >> how to measure the effects of their changes. Simply > >> - tweaking the parameters and hoping that that will > >> + tweaking the parameters and hoping that will > > > > This "that that" was correct. I am travelling; can you fix it? > > I read this a few times. Switched to > - tweaking the parameters and hoping that will > + tweaking the parameters and hoping that the tweaks will That looks good; thanks. > > A fun sentence for you: Tim where Jim had had "had had" had had "had"; > "had had" had had a better effect on the teacher. (Is it really "Tim", or "Time"?) -Ben
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