Date: Wed, 30 May 2001 12:18:53 -0700 From: "Bruce A. Mah" <bmah@FreeBSD.ORG> To: Randy Pratt <rpratt@ezwv.com> Cc: Nik Clayton <nik@FreeBSD.ORG>, Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.ORG>, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Subject: Re: Illustrated Installation Guide Message-ID: <200105301918.f4UJIr277909@bmah-freebsd-0.cisco.com> In-Reply-To: <01053012311102.00379@k6-2.weeble.com> References: <01053012311102.00379@k6-2.weeble.com>
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--==_Exmh_-1241567473P Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii If memory serves me right, Randy Pratt wrote: > I finished the first pass of the installation guide in sgml format. Since > this is my first attempt, I'm sure there's still work that needs to be done > (sgml and content). Nicely done sir! Hope you don't mind a couple nitpicks: 1. You used <keycap></keycap> elements in a few places where it's not quite appropriate (look for the first couple or three times this gets used). Told you this was a nitpik. 2. There's a few places where you refer to programs such as ifconfig, et al. Usually we use &man entities for this (so ifconfig would be written &man.ifconfig.8;). This makes hyperlinks to HTML-ized manpages work. Don't know if you have tried this yet, but I thought the PDF version of your file looked pretty nifty too.... % make FORMATS=pdf % acroread book.pdf I personally would love to see this document replace the installation guide in RELNOTESng. About the only thing that it has that your preview does not is how one goes about actually obtaining the distribution. In any case, we ought to have more pointers to your document. Cheers, Bruce. --==_Exmh_-1241567473P Content-Type: application/pgp-signature -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.0.5 (FreeBSD) Comment: Exmh version 2.3.1+ 05/14/2001 iD8DBQE7FUed2MoxcVugUsMRAj/FAJ0SSXXNQoaK96mdlk9E5rSXFauiPgCggsfj 22Yw0ePiX5tlBT7tojOda94= =fgp1 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --==_Exmh_-1241567473P-- To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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