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Date:      Wed, 12 Jul 2017 15:11:38 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Xin LI <delphij@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r50476 - head/share/security/advisories
Message-ID:  <201707121511.v6CFBc7K033429@repo.freebsd.org>

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Author: delphij
Date: Wed Jul 12 15:11:38 2017
New Revision: 50476
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/50476

Log:
  Wordsmithing from gjb@

Modified:
  head/share/security/advisories/FreeBSD-EN-17:06.hyperv.asc
  head/share/security/advisories/FreeBSD-SA-17:05.heimdal.asc

Modified: head/share/security/advisories/FreeBSD-EN-17:06.hyperv.asc
==============================================================================
--- head/share/security/advisories/FreeBSD-EN-17:06.hyperv.asc	Wed Jul 12 08:31:16 2017	(r50475)
+++ head/share/security/advisories/FreeBSD-EN-17:06.hyperv.asc	Wed Jul 12 15:11:38 2017	(r50476)
@@ -23,19 +23,19 @@ branches, and the following sections, please visit
 I.   Background
 
 Hyper-V is a default hypervisor provided on Windows server by Microsoft.
-ATA driver is the legacy storage driver for FreeBSD on Hyperv, now they
-are replaced by synthetic driver which has better performance.
+The ATA driver is the legacy storage driver for FreeBSD on Hyperv; now they
+are replaced by a synthetic driver which has better performance.
 
-There are issues when attaching multiple synthetic storage driver for
+There are issues when attaching multiple synthetic storage drivers for
 FreeBSD 10.3 on some of Hyper-V hosts.
 
-CD/DVD cannot be detected in some circumstances which cause provisioning
+The CD/DVD cannot be detected in some circumstances which causes provisioning
 fail on Azure.
 
 II.  Problem Description
 
 The disk INQUIRY response is not complete for FreeBSD 10.3 on some
-Hyper-V hosts, which will cause the disks will be detached during boot.
+Hyper-V hosts, which will cause the disks to be detached during boot.
 
 An interrupt is missing if we allow intr_shuffle_irqs on Hyper-V.
 
@@ -45,7 +45,8 @@ FreeBSD 10.3 can not be boot properly on a guest syste
 
 IV.  Workaround
 
-No workaround is available.
+No workaround is available, however systems not running within Hyper-V or
+Azure are unaffected.
 
 V.   Solution
 
@@ -117,17 +118,17 @@ The latest revision of this advisory is available at
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Modified: head/share/security/advisories/FreeBSD-SA-17:05.heimdal.asc
==============================================================================
--- head/share/security/advisories/FreeBSD-SA-17:05.heimdal.asc	Wed Jul 12 08:31:16 2017	(r50475)
+++ head/share/security/advisories/FreeBSD-SA-17:05.heimdal.asc	Wed Jul 12 15:11:38 2017	(r50476)
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ following sections, please visit <URL:https://security
 I.   Background
 
 Heimdal implements the Kerberos 5 network authentication protocols.
-The Kerberos protocol uses "ticket" to authenticate a client to a
+The Kerberos protocol uses "tickets" to authenticate a client to a
 service.
 
 A Key Distribution Center (KDC) is trusted by all principals registered
@@ -35,16 +35,15 @@ in that administrative "realm" to store a secret key i
 which, the proof of knowledge is used to verify the authenticity of a
 principal.
 
-
 II.  Problem Description
 
-There is a programming error in Heimdal implementation that used an
+There is a programming error in the Heimdal implementation that used an
 unauthenticated, plain-text version of the KDC-REP service name found
 in a ticket.
 
 III. Impact
 
-An attacker who has control to the network between a client and the
+An attacker who has control of the network between a client and the
 service it talks to will be able to impersonate the service, allowing
 a successful man-in-the-middle (MITM) attack that circumvents the mutual
 authentication.
@@ -130,17 +129,17 @@ The latest revision of this advisory is available at
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