Date: Sun, 20 Feb 2005 15:48:07 +0100 From: "Joel Dahl" <joel@automatvapen.se> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/77778: [patch] Developers-Handbook, Remove contractions Message-ID: <20050220144755.C445737E45@smtp3-1-sn3.vrr.skanova.net> Resent-Message-ID: <200502201450.j1KEoFkZ040888@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 77778
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: [patch] Developers-Handbook, Remove contractions
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Sun Feb 20 14:50:14 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Joel Dahl
>Release: FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD dude.automatvapen.se 5.3-STABLE FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE #0: Thu Feb 10 12:46:21 CET 2005 joel@dude.automatvapen.se:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386
>Description:
The attached patch removes a few contractions in the Developers-Handbook.
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
--- cont_developers.diff begins here ---
Index: kerneldebug/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/kerneldebug/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.55
diff -u -r1.55 chapter.sgml
--- kerneldebug/chapter.sgml 12 Dec 2004 12:29:42 -0000 1.55
+++ kerneldebug/chapter.sgml 20 Feb 2005 14:39:20 -0000
@@ -131,9 +131,9 @@
<para>This instructs &man.savecore.8; to extract a kernel dump
from <filename>/dev/ad0s1b</filename> and place the contents in
- <filename>/var/crash</filename>. Don't forget to make sure the
+ <filename>/var/crash</filename>. Do not forget to make sure the
destination directory <filename>/var/crash</filename> has enough
- space for the dump. Also, don't forget to specify the correct path to your swap
+ space for the dump. Also, do not forget to specify the correct path to your swap
device as it is likely different than
<filename>/dev/ad0s1b</filename>!</para></tip>
@@ -414,7 +414,7 @@
</varlistentry>
</variablelist>
- <tip><para>If your system is crashing regularly and you're running
+ <tip><para>If your system is crashing regularly and you are running
out of disk space, deleting old <filename>vmcore</filename>
files in <filename>/var/crash</filename> could save a
considerable amount of disk space!</para></tip>
Index: tools/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/tools/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.42
diff -u -r1.42 chapter.sgml
--- tools/chapter.sgml 9 Dec 2004 11:45:37 -0000 1.42
+++ tools/chapter.sgml 20 Feb 2005 14:40:28 -0000
@@ -794,7 +794,7 @@
<question>
<para>I compiled a file called
<filename>foobar.c</filename> and I cannot find an
- executable called <filename>foobar</filename>. Where's
+ executable called <filename>foobar</filename>. Where has
it gone?</para>
</question>
--- cont_developers.diff ends here ---
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