Date: Mon, 20 May 2002 23:49:23 +0200 (CEST) From: Marc Fonvieille <marc@blackend.org> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/38361: Minor corrections in section 2.9.16 of the Handbook Message-ID: <200205202149.g4KLnNC7014536@abigail.blackend.org>
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>Number: 38361
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: Minor corrections in section 2.9.16 of the Handbook
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Mon May 20 15:00:05 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Marc Fonvieille
>Release: FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD abigail.blackend.org 4.6-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE #5: Sun May 12 00:30:43 CEST 2002 marc@abigail.blackend.org:/usr/src/sys/compile/ABIGAIL i386
>Description:
Minor corrections in section 2.9.16 of the Handbook. Read the patch
below for more details.
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
Apply the patch to handbook/install/chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml.diff begins here ---
--- chapter.sgml.org Mon May 20 22:13:05 2002
+++ chapter.sgml Mon May 20 23:44:36 2002
@@ -4284,9 +4284,9 @@
Yes [ No ]</screen>
- <para>Selecting <guibutton>[ No ]</guibutton> with the arrow keys
- and pressing <keycap>Enter</keycap> returns to the Main
- Installation Menu</para>
+ <para>Select <guibutton>[ No ]</guibutton> with the arrow keys
+ and press <keycap>Enter</keycap> to return to the Main
+ Installation Menu.</para>
<figure id="final-main">
<title>Exit Install</title>
@@ -4308,9 +4308,9 @@
[ Yes ] No</screen>
- <para>Select <guibutton>[ Yes ]</guibutton> and remove floppy if
- booting from floppy. The CDROM drive is locked until the machine
- starts to reboot. The CDROM drive is then unlocked and can
+ <para>Select <guibutton>[ Yes ]</guibutton> and remove the floppy if
+ booting from the floppy. The CDROM drive is locked until the machine
+ starts to reboot. The CDROM drive is then unlocked and the CDROM can
be removed from drive (quickly).</para>
<para>The system will reboot so watch for any error messages that
--- chapter.sgml.diff ends here ---
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