Date: Fri, 13 Oct 2006 07:55:29 -0400 From: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org> To: Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net> Cc: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook book.sgml Message-ID: <20061013075529.4b7d5460.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <20061013114342.GK24163@submonkey.net> References: <200610131029.k9DATqdc082510@repoman.freebsd.org> <20061013114342.GK24163@submonkey.net>
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On Fri, 13 Oct 2006 12:43:43 +0100 Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net> wrote: > On Fri, Oct 13, 2006 at 10:29:52AM +0000, Tom Rhodes wrote: > > trhodes 2006-10-13 10:29:52 UTC > > > > FreeBSD doc repository > > > > Modified files: > > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook book.sgml > > Log: > > "Many sections do not yet exist" sounds very misleading to me. Reword > > slightly to be more in line with the current state of our handbook. > > > > | --- doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml 2006/05/16 14:01:06 1.166 > > | +++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml 2006/10/13 10:29:51 1.167 > > | @@ -124,8 +124,8 @@ > > | to day use of <emphasis>FreeBSD &rel2.current;-RELEASE</emphasis> > > | and <emphasis>FreeBSD &rel.current;-RELEASE</emphasis>. > > | This manual is a <emphasis>work in progress</emphasis> and is the work > > | - of many individuals. Many sections do not yet exist and some of those > > | - that do exist need to be updated. If you are interested in helping > > | + of many individuals. As such, some sections may become dated and need > > | + updated. If you are interested in helping out > > ... and require updating. Bah, it sounded good at the time. My Friday the 13th came early this year. -- Tom Rhodes
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