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Date:      Thu, 20 Apr 2017 10:43:09 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Remko Lodder <remko@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r50186 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall
Message-ID:  <201704201043.v3KAh9q1037645@repo.freebsd.org>

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Author: remko
Date: Thu Apr 20 10:43:08 2017
New Revision: 50186
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/50186

Log:
  Use uppercase W at the beginning of a new sentence.
  
  Found while translating the document.
  
  Facilitated by:		Snow B.V.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml	Thu Apr 20 04:06:34 2017	(r50185)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml	Thu Apr 20 10:43:08 2017	(r50186)
@@ -1633,7 +1633,7 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID
 	including stripe (not recommended, no redundancy), mirror
 	(best performance, least usable space), and RAID-Z 1, 2, and 3
 	(with the capability to withstand the concurrent failure of 1,
-	2, and 3 disks, respectively).  while selecting the pool type,
+	2, and 3 disks, respectively).  While selecting the pool type,
 	a tooltip is displayed across the bottom of the screen with
 	advice about the number of required disks, and in the case of
 	RAID-Z, the optimal number of disks for each



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