Date: Mon, 07 May 2001 13:50:22 -0700 From: bmah@freebsd.org (Bruce A. Mah) To: Wilko Bulte <wkb@freebie.demon.nl> Cc: FreeBSD-alpha mailing list <freebsd-alpha@freebsd.org>, bmah@freebsd.org, dd@freebsd.org Subject: Re: request for comments / proc-alpha.sgml in -current Message-ID: <200105072050.f47KoMq75699@bmah-freebsd-0.cisco.com> In-Reply-To: <20010506155336.A43034@freebie.demon.nl> References: <20010506155336.A43034@freebie.demon.nl>
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--==_Exmh_-1227579965P Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii If memory serves me right, Wilko Bulte wrote: > I appreciate comments that you might have, on bugs/typos/whatever, but also > on the actual sgml. I'm not an experienced sgml user by any measure so > I guess there is room for improvement. Hi Wilko-- First I want to say thanks for dealing with a very large SGML conversion! In addition to picking up from the (very early) point where I left off, you also fixed a number of problems with my mark-up. I'm not that much farther along the SGML road than you are, so I'll leave most of these issues to those who are more qualified than both of us. One thing I noticed before (still not sure how to deal with this) is that there's a lot of places where command lines (with prompts) are dealt with either in-line or as separate <screen></screen> elements, but not consistently. As an example, compare the command-line in the "Birds" section versus the command-lines for the Mustang/Avanti. I'm not sure what way makes most sense to fix this, BTW. These are pretty minor things, I think, and I'm sure the rest of the release documentation has similar things that *I* did strangely. They can be fixed up over time. Thanks again.....nice work. Bruce. --==_Exmh_-1227579965P Content-Type: application/pgp-signature -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.0.5 (FreeBSD) Comment: Exmh version 2.2 06/23/2000 iD8DBQE69wqN2MoxcVugUsMRAsTgAKDkKdWsGfbAewwjg9WreSXC6jfNJwCg0SOn gF5kXR7/4zswLODbmLa80Io= =MUJ2 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --==_Exmh_-1227579965P-- To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-alpha" in the body of the message
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