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Date:      Wed, 9 Oct 2002 15:46:42 +0200
From:      Lukasz Bojarski <ni@merkury.pol.lublin.pl>
To:        freebsd-doc@freebsd.org
Subject:   Re: docs/41546: [PATCH] adding non-breaking spaces to the handbook
Message-ID:  <20021009154642.A1703@merkury.pol.lublin.pl>
In-Reply-To: <20021009113333.B86009@sumuk.de>; from martin@sumuk.de on Wed, Oct 09, 2002 at 11:33:33AM %2B0200
References:  <200210010916.g919GafL015248@freefall.freebsd.org> <20021009113333.B86009@sumuk.de>

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> How about the following patch?
> 
> ***
> Index: writing-style/chapter.sgml
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /u/cvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.sgml,v
> retrieving revision 1.30
> diff -u -r1.30 chapter.sgml
> --- writing-style/chapter.sgml	31 Aug 2002 20:14:13 -0000	1.30
> +++ writing-style/chapter.sgml	9 Oct 2002 09:10:22 -0000
> @@ -314,6 +314,35 @@
>  	the second change, be sure to indicate that this is a whitespace-only
>  	change, and that the translation team can ignore it.</para>
>      </sect2>
> +
> +    <sect2>
> +      <title>Nonbreaking space</title>
> +
> +      <para>Avoid line breaks in places where they look ugly
> +	or make it difficult to follow a sentence.  Line breaks depend
> +	on the width of the chosen output medium.  In particular, viewing
> +	the HTML documentation with a text browser can lead to badly
> +	formatted paragraphs like the next one:</para>
> +
> +      <literallayout class="monospaced">Data capacity ranges from 40 MB to 15
> +GB.  Hardware compression &hellip;</literallayout>
> +
> +      <para>The general entity <literal>&amp;nbsp;</literal> prohibits
> +	line breaks between parts belonging together.  Use nonbreaking
> +	spaces in the following places:</para>
> +
> +      <itemizedlist>
> +	<listitem>
> +	  <para>between numbers and units:</para>
> +	  <programlisting><![ CDATA [57600&nbsp;bps]]></programlisting>
> +	</listitem>
> +
> +	<listitem>
> +	  <para>between program names and version numbers:</para>
> +	  <programlisting><![ CDATA [FreeBSD&nbsp;4.7]]></programlisting>
> +	</listitem>

Also IMHO:

+	<listitem>
+	  <para>between first and last name:</para>
+	  <programlisting><![ CDATA [John&nbsp;Smith]]></programlisting>
+	</listitem>
+
+	<listitem>
+	  <para>between multiword names (use with caution when applying this
+	  to more than 3-4 word names like 
+	  "The FreeBSD Brazilian Portuguese Documentation Project"):</para>
+	  <programlisting><![ CDATA [Sun&nbsp;Microsystems]]></programlisting>
+	</listitem>

> +      </itemizedlist>
> +    </sect2>
>    </sect1>
>  
>    <sect1>
> ***

Best Wishes
Lukasz Bojarski


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