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Date:      Sun, 26 Nov 2017 18:39:36 +1100
From:      Greg 'groggy' Lehey <grog@FreeBSD.org>
To:        Jan Beich <jbeich@FreeBSD.org>
Cc:        ports-committers@freebsd.org, svn-ports-all@freebsd.org, svn-ports-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   Re: svn commit: r454902 - head/www/firefox-esr
Message-ID:  <20171126073936.GI25761@eureka.lemis.com>
In-Reply-To: <8tet-d64u-wny@FreeBSD.org>
References:  <201711260348.vAQ3mFCf002880@repo.freebsd.org> <8tet-d64u-wny@FreeBSD.org>

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On Sunday, 26 November 2017 at  5:18:57 +0100, Jan Beich wrote:
> Greg Lehey <grog@FreeBSD.org> writes:
>> @@ -1,13 +1,3 @@
>> -Mozilla Firefox is a free and open source web browser descended from the
>> -Mozilla Application Suite. It is small, fast and easy to use, and offers
>> -many advanced features:
>> +Firefox ESR is an Extended Support Release of firefox.
>
> This is too short and probably better fit for COMMENT instead if you
> deduplicate some words.

Agreed, might be a little short.  I've added more information.  But it
seems inappropriate to describe firefox here, when the port has a more
specific purpose.

>> -WWW: http://www.mozilla.com/firefox
>> +WWW: https://www.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/organizations/faq/
>
> Better drop en-US/ part in case there's non-English version available.

Done.

Feel free to modify if you still don't like what you see.

Greg
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