Date: Sun, 9 Jan 2000 16:31:04 +1100 (EST) From: jsutton@bbcon.com.au To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Subject: docs/16000: changes for Introduction section of the Handbook Message-ID: <200001090531.QAA45439@firewall.bbcon.com.au>
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>Number: 16000
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: changes for Introduction section of the Handbook
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: change-request
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Sat Jan 8 21:40:00 PST 2000
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Joel Sutton
>Release: FreeBSD 3.3-RELEASE i386
>Organization:
Busy Bee Consulting
>Environment:
FreeBSD stargate.home 3.3-RELEASE FreeBSD 3.3-RELEASE #0: Tue Dec 21 17:18:52 EST 1999 root@stargate.home:/usr/src/sys/compile/OFFICE i386
>Description:
The paragraph about the multi-user capabilities of FreeBSD didn't read
very well. This patch makes my suggested changes.
Perl isn't mentioned as one of the development tools. This patch
also makes that change.
Could someone please take a look at these small problems.
Thanks, Joel...
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
Index: chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /usr/home/cvs/FreeBSD/doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.22
diff -u -r1.22 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml 1999/12/04 06:19:12 1.22
+++ chapter.sgml 2000/01/07 04:11:25
@@ -37,8 +37,8 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para><emphasis>Multiuser</emphasis> access means that many
- people can use a FreeBSD system simultaneously for a variety
+ <para><emphasis>Multiuser facilities</emphasis> which allow many
+ people to use a FreeBSD system simultaneously for a variety
of things. This means, for example, that system peripherals
such as printers and tape drives are properly shared between
all users on the system or the network and that individual
@@ -108,8 +108,9 @@
<listitem>
<para>A full complement of <emphasis>C</emphasis>,
- <emphasis>C++</emphasis> and <emphasis>Fortran</emphasis>
- development tools. Many additional languages for advanced research
+ <emphasis>C++</emphasis>, <emphasis>Fortran</emphasis>,
+ and <emphasis>Perl</emphasis> development tools.
+ Many additional languages for advanced research
and development are also available in the ports and packages
collection.</para>
</listitem>
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