Date: Mon, 04 Jan 2010 13:28:26 -0800 From: Doug Barton <dougb@FreeBSD.org> To: Gavin Atkinson <gavin@FreeBSD.org> Cc: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml Message-ID: <4B425D7A.7030101@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <alpine.BSF.2.00.1001042109440.41098@ury.york.ac.uk> References: <201001042038.o04KcFo8028508@repoman.freebsd.org> <alpine.BSF.2.00.1001042109440.41098@ury.york.ac.uk>
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Gavin Atkinson wrote: > On Mon, 4 Jan 2010, Doug Barton wrote: >> dougb 2010-01-04 20:38:15 UTC >> >> Modified files: >> en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml >> Log: >> Actually having the $FreeBSD$ tag expanded in the example rc.d script >> did not end up looking as cool as I thought it would, so switch to an >> unexpanded example. >> >> Fix the text in the new paragraph to work better around the markup. > >> <para> Unless there is a good reason to start the service >> earlier all ports scripts should use >> - <programlisting>REQUIRE: LOGIN</programlisting>. If the service >> + <programlisting>REQUIRE: LOGIN</programlisting> If the service >> runs as a particular user (other than root) this is mandatory. > > This is now grammatically incorrect. I actually think the original is > better than any rewording I can come up with. Take a quick look at the page before it auto-updates. The old way the period ends up all by itself in the text after the programlisting box, so it looks like this: . If the service Doug -- Improve the effectiveness of your Internet presence with a domain name makeover! http://SupersetSolutions.com/ Computers are useless. They can only give you answers. -- Pablo Picasso
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