Date: Sat, 5 Jul 2008 03:19:31 +0000 (UTC) From: Gabor Pali <pgj@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq book.sgml Message-ID: <200807050319.m653JVnc028990@repoman.freebsd.org>
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pgj 2008-07-05 03:19:31 UTC
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Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq book.sgml
Log:
Update Question 18.11:
- Add non-breakable spaces for better rendering
- Unfold and mark up Microsoft, Intel
- Mark up literals with <literal>
- Fix formulas, add <superscript>
- Fix grammar (suggested by gabor)
- Remove Ethernet address as example, because it is 48 bits long
- Reword sentences with grammar bogons (submitted by trhodes)
Reviewed by: trhodes
Approved by: gabor
Revision Changes Path
1.1057 +19 -19 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml
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