Date: Thu, 31 Jan 2002 09:30:02 -0800 (PST) From: Tom Rhodes <darklogik@pittgoth.com> To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/34328: Minor corrections to kernelconfig Message-ID: <200201311730.g0VHU2e27194@freefall.freebsd.org>
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The following reply was made to PR docs/34328; it has been noted by GNATS. From: Tom Rhodes <darklogik@pittgoth.com> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/34328: Minor corrections to kernelconfig Date: Thu, 31 Jan 2002 12:33:35 -0500 Recently looking this over, we have 2 prs for the kernelconfig chapter, they will cancell each other out in line variances, and i'm going to combine them... I see your logic in this, but I will point out a few things that I don't agree with: you have: <command>vi</command> and <command>ee</command> which will work, yes, but the sentence does not push the user to look at a command, in hence, it sounds more like you want to refer to a utility or application. The new patch will hug vi and ee in the <application> tags. You have <command>make world</command> when the FDP primer requests the use of <maketarget> as "make world" is more of a target. Some of your other ideas I agree with, mainly the grammer, but I will submit a patch with your changes, my changes and cover pr: 34137 in it... Thanks for pointing these out! -- Tom (Darklogik) Rhodes www.Pittgoth.com Gothic Liberation Front www.FreeBSD.org The Power To Serve To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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