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Date:      Tue, 12 Mar 2013 15:22:21 +0800
From:      Ganbold Tsagaankhuu <ganbold@gmail.com>
To:        Dru Lavigne <dru@freebsd.org>
Cc:        svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org
Subject:   Re: svn commit: r41052 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms
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Hi,

On Thu, Feb 28, 2013 at 4:38 AM, Dru Lavigne <dru@freebsd.org> wrote:
> Author: dru
> Date: Wed Feb 27 20:38:17 2013
> New Revision: 41052
> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41052
>
> Log:
>   First pass at this chapter. This patch addresses the following:
>
>   - &os;, you, and please
>
>   - fix xref, acronym, and directory tags (still needs ulink review)
>
>   - removed redundant warning, leaving only first instance; this warning can be removed altogether once 7.x is EOL at end of month
>
>   Approved by:  bcr (mentor)
>

I know I'm late but just went through the changes for translation
purpose, in future is it possible to make such huge changes as a
smaller commits and as much as try to separate white space changes?

That way we could keep up to date doc for not only English as well as
for other languages and yet it could be easier for translators to
catch up.

White space changes together with other changes make hard to look and
translate, almost like translating all over again.
Yet it makes some bugs/typos (I've seen couple of it) go in and hard to review.
I think most of the translators are 1-2 person in either languages
except English, so I think they may have same difficulties in such
case like me. But I could be wrong.

thanks a lot,

Ganbold


> Modified:
>   head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms/chapter.xml
>
> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms/chapter.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms/chapter.xml Tue Feb 26 16:52:43 2013        (r41051)
> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms/chapter.xml Wed Feb 27 20:38:17 2013        (r41052)
> @@ -13,31 +13,28 @@
>
>      <indexterm><primary>serial communications</primary></indexterm>
>
> -    <para>&unix; has always had support for serial communications.  In
> -      fact, the very first &unix; machines relied on serial lines for
> -      user input and output.  Things have changed a lot from the days
> -      when the average <quote>terminal</quote> consisted of a
> -      10-character-per-second serial printer and a keyboard.  This
> -      chapter will cover some of the ways in which FreeBSD uses serial
> -      communications.</para>
> +    <para>&unix; has always had support for serial communications as
> +      the very first &unix; machines relied on serial lines for user
> +      input and output.  Things have changed a lot from the days
> +      when the average terminal consisted of a 10-character-per-second
> +      serial printer and a keyboard.  This chapter covers some of the
> +      ways serial communications can be used on &os;.</para>
>
>      <para>After reading this chapter, you will know:</para>
>
>      <itemizedlist>
>        <listitem>
> -       <para>How to connect terminals to your FreeBSD
> -         system.</para>
> +       <para>How to connect terminals to a &os; system.</para>
>        </listitem>
>        <listitem>
> -       <para>How to use a modem to dial out to remote
> -         hosts.</para>
> +       <para>How to use a modem to dial out to remote hosts.</para>
>        </listitem>
>        <listitem>
> -       <para>How to allow remote users to login to your
> -         system with a modem.</para>
> +       <para>How to allow remote users to login to a &os; system
> +         with a modem.</para>
>        </listitem>
>        <listitem>
> -       <para>How to boot your system from a serial console.</para>
> +       <para>How to boot a &os; system from a serial console.</para>
>        </listitem>
>      </itemizedlist>
>
> @@ -45,17 +42,16 @@
>
>      <itemizedlist>
>        <listitem>
> -       <para>Know how to configure and install a new kernel (<xref
> -           linkend="kernelconfig"/>).</para>
> +       <para>Know how to <link linkend="kernelconfig"> configure and
> +           install a custom kernel</link>.</para>
>        </listitem>
>        <listitem>
> -       <para>Understand &unix; permissions and processes (<xref
> -           linkend="basics"/>).</para>
> +       <para>Understand <link linkend="basics"> &os; permissions
> +           and processes</link>.</para>
>        </listitem>
>        <listitem>
>         <para>Have access to the technical manual for the serial
> -         hardware (modem or multi-port card) that you would like to
> -         use with FreeBSD.</para>
> +         hardware to be used with &os;.</para>
>        </listitem>
>      </itemizedlist>
>    </sect1>
> @@ -82,30 +78,30 @@
>        <variablelist>
>         <indexterm><primary>bits-per-second</primary></indexterm>
>         <varlistentry>
> -         <term>bps</term>
> +         <term><acronym>bps</acronym></term>
>           <listitem>
> -           <para>Bits per Second &mdash; the rate at which data is
> -             transmitted</para>
> +           <para>Bits per Second (<acronym>bps</acronym>) is the rate
> +             at which data is transmitted.</para>
>           </listitem>
>         </varlistentry>
>
>         <varlistentry>
> -         <term>DTE</term>
> +         <term><acronym>DTE</acronym></term>
>           <listitem>
>             <indexterm><primary>DTE</primary></indexterm>
>
> -           <para>Data Terminal Equipment &mdash; for example, your
> -             computer</para>
> +           <para>An example of a Data Terminal Equipment
> +             (<acronym>DTE</acronym>) is a computer.</para>
>           </listitem>
>         </varlistentry>
>
>         <varlistentry>
> -         <term>DCE</term>
> +         <term><acronym>DCE</acronym></term>
>           <listitem>
>             <indexterm><primary>DCE</primary></indexterm>
>
> -           <para>Data Communications Equipment &mdash; your
> -             modem</para>
> +           <para>An example of a Data Communications Equipment
> +             (<acronym>DTE</acronym>) is a modem.</para>
>           </listitem>
>         </varlistentry>
>
> @@ -115,8 +111,9 @@
>           <listitem>
>             <indexterm><primary>RS-232C cables</primary></indexterm>
>
> -           <para>EIA standard for hardware serial
> -             communications</para>
> +           <para>The original standard for hardware serial
> +             communications.  It is now usually referred to as
> +             <acronym>TIA</acronym>-232</para>
>           </listitem>
>         </varlistentry>
>        </variablelist>
> @@ -124,28 +121,26 @@
>        <para>When talking about communications data rates, this section
>         does not use the term <quote>baud</quote>.  Baud refers to the
>         number of electrical state transitions that may be made in a
> -       period of time, while <quote>bps</quote> (bits per second) is
> -       the <emphasis>correct</emphasis> term to use (at least it does
> -       not seem to bother the curmudgeons quite as much).</para>
> +       period of time, while <acronym>bps</acronym> is the
> +       <emphasis>correct</emphasis> term to use.</para>
>      </sect2>
>
>      <sect2 id="serial-cables-ports">
>        <title>Cables and Ports</title>
>
> -      <para>To connect a modem or terminal to your FreeBSD system, you
> -       will need a serial port on your computer and the proper cable
> -       to connect to your serial device.  If you are already familiar
> -       with your hardware and the cable it requires, you can safely
> -       skip this section.</para>
> +      <para>To connect a modem or serial terminal to a &os; system, a
> +       serial port on the computer and the proper cable to connect to
> +       the serial device are needed.  Users who are already familiar
> +       with serial hardware and cabling can safely skip this
> +       section.</para>
>
>        <sect3 id="term-cables">
>         <title>Cables</title>
>
>         <para>There are several different kinds of serial cables.  The
> -         two most common types for our purposes are null-modem cables
> -         and standard (<quote>straight</quote>) RS-232 cables.  The
> -         documentation for your hardware should describe the type of
> -         cable required.</para>
> +         two most common types are null-modem cables and standard
> +         RS-232 cables.  The documentation for the hardware should
> +         describe the type of cable required.</para>
>
>         <sect4 id="term-cables-null">
>           <title>Null-modem Cables</title>
> @@ -160,16 +155,15 @@
>             <quote>Transmitted Data</quote> pin on one end goes to the
>             <quote>Received Data</quote> pin on the other end.</para>
>
> -         <para>You can also construct your own null-modem cable for
> -           use with terminals (e.g., for quality purposes).  This
> -           table shows the RS-232C <link
> -             linkend="serialcomms-signal-names">signals</link>
> -           and the pin numbers on a DB-25 connector.  Note that the
> -           standard also calls for a straight-through pin 1 to pin 1
> -           <emphasis>Protective Ground</emphasis> line, but it is
> -           often omitted.  Some terminals work OK using only pins 2,
> -           3 and 7, while others require different configurations
> -           than the examples shown below.</para>
> +         <para>A null-modem cable can be constructed for use with
> +           terminals.  The following table shows the RS-232C <link
> +             linkend="serialcomms-signal-names">signal names</link>
> +           and the pin numbers on a DB-25 connector.  While the
> +           standard calls for a straight-through pin 1 to pin 1
> +           <emphasis>Protective Ground</emphasis> line, it is often
> +           omitted.  Some terminals work using only pins 2, 3, and
> +           7, while others require different configurations than
> +           the examples shown below.</para>
>
>           <table frame="none" pgwide="1">
>             <title>DB-25 to DB-25 Null-Modem Cable</title>
> @@ -261,8 +255,8 @@
>             </tgroup>
>           </table>
>
> -         <para>Here are two other schemes more common
> -           nowadays.</para>
> +         <para>The next two tables show two other common
> +           schemes.</para>
>
>           <table frame="none" pgwide="1">
>             <title>DB-9 to DB-9 Null-Modem Cable</title>
> @@ -451,10 +445,9 @@
>               and a long wire to the other single pin.</para>
>           </note>
>
> -         <para>The above designs seems to be the most popular.  In
> -           another variation (explained in the book <emphasis>RS-232
> -             Made Easy</emphasis>) SG connects to SG, TD connects to
> -           RD, RTS and CTS connect to DCD, DTR connects to DSR, and
> +         <para>The above designs seem to be the most popular.  In
> +           another variation, SG connects to SG, TD connects to RD,
> +           RTS and CTS connect to DCD, DTR connects to DSR, and
>             vice-versa.</para>
>         </sect4>
>
> @@ -464,11 +457,11 @@
>           <indexterm><primary>RS-232C cables</primary></indexterm>
>
>           <para>A standard serial cable passes all of the RS-232C
> -           signals straight through.  That is, the <quote>Transmitted
> +           signals straight through.  The <quote>Transmitted
>               Data</quote> pin on one end of the cable goes to the
>             <quote>Transmitted Data</quote> pin on the other end.
> -           This is the type of cable to use to connect a modem to
> -           your FreeBSD system, and is also appropriate for some
> +           This is the type of cable used to connect a modem to
> +           the &os; system, and is also appropriate for some
>             terminals.</para>
>         </sect4>
>        </sect3>
> @@ -477,61 +470,61 @@
>         <title>Ports</title>
>
>         <para>Serial ports are the devices through which data is
> -         transferred between the FreeBSD host computer and the
> +         transferred between the &os; host computer and the
>           terminal.  This section describes the kinds of ports that
> -         exist and how they are addressed in FreeBSD.</para>
> +         exist and how they are addressed in &os;.</para>
>
>         <sect4 id="term-portkinds">
>           <title>Kinds of Ports</title>
>
> -         <para>Several kinds of serial ports exist.  Before you
> -           purchase or construct a cable, you need to make sure it
> -           will fit the ports on your terminal and on the FreeBSD
> +         <para>Several kinds of serial ports exist.  Before
> +           purchasing or constructing a cable, make sure it will
> +           fit the ports on the terminal and on the &os;
>             system.</para>
>
> -         <para>Most terminals will have DB-25 ports.  Personal
> -           computers, including PCs running FreeBSD, will have DB-25
> -           or DB-9 ports.  If you have a multiport serial card for
> -           your PC, you may have RJ-12 or RJ-45 ports.</para>
> +         <para>Most terminals have DB-25 ports.  Personal computers
> +           may have DB-25 or DB-9 ports.  A multiport serial card may
> +           have RJ-12 or RJ-45 ports.</para>
>
>           <para>See the documentation that accompanied the hardware
> -           for specifications on the kind of port in use.  A visual
> -           inspection of the port often works too.</para>
> +           for specifications on the kind of port or visually verify
> +           the type of port.</para>
>         </sect4>
>
>         <sect4 id="term-portnames">
>           <title>Port Names</title>
>
> -         <para>In FreeBSD, you access each serial port through an
> -           entry in the <filename>/dev</filename> directory.  There
> -           are two different kinds of entries:</para>
> +         <para>In &os;, each serial port is accessed through an
> +           entry in <filename class="directory">/dev</filename>.
> +           There are two different kinds of entries:</para>
>
>           <itemizedlist>
>             <listitem>
>               <para>Call-in ports are named
>                 <filename>/dev/ttyu<replaceable>N</replaceable></filename>
>                 where <replaceable>N</replaceable> is the port number,
> -               starting from zero.  Generally, you use the call-in
> -               port for terminals.  Call-in ports require that the
> -               serial line assert the data carrier detect (DCD)
> -               signal to work correctly.</para>
> +               starting from zero.  Generally, the call-in port is
> +               used for terminals.  Call-in ports require that the
> +               serial line assert the Data Carrier Detect
> +               (<acronym>DCD</acronym>) signal to work
> +               correctly.</para>
>             </listitem>
>
>             <listitem>
>               <para>Call-out ports are named
>                 <filename>/dev/cuau<replaceable>N</replaceable></filename>.
> -               You usually do not use the call-out port for
> -               terminals, just for modems.  You may use the call-out
> -               port if the serial cable or the terminal does not
> -               support the carrier detect signal.</para>
> +               Call-out ports are usually not used for terminals, but
> +               are used for modems.  The call-out port can be used if
> +               the serial cable or the terminal does not support the
> +               carrier detect signal.</para>
>             </listitem>
>           </itemizedlist>
>
> -         <para>If you have connected a terminal to the first serial
> -           port(<devicename>COM1</devicename> in &ms-dos;), then you
> -           will use <filename>/dev/ttyu0</filename> to refer to the
> +         <para>If a terminal is connected to the first serial
> +           port(<devicename>COM1</devicename>), use
> +           <filename>/dev/ttyu0</filename> to refer to the
>             terminal.  If the terminal is on the second serial port
> -           (also known as <devicename>COM2</devicename>), use
> +           (<devicename>COM2</devicename>), use
>             <filename>/dev/ttyu1</filename>, and so forth.</para>
>
>         </sect4>
> @@ -541,25 +534,25 @@
>      <sect2>
>        <title>Kernel Configuration</title>
>
> -      <para>FreeBSD supports four serial ports by default.  In the
> +      <para>&os; supports four serial ports by default.  In the
>         &ms-dos; world, these are known as
>         <devicename>COM1</devicename>,
>         <devicename>COM2</devicename>,
>         <devicename>COM3</devicename>, and
> -       <devicename>COM4</devicename>.  FreeBSD currently supports
> +       <devicename>COM4</devicename>.  &os; currently supports
>         <quote>dumb</quote> multiport serial interface cards, such as
> -       the BocaBoard 1008 and 2016, as well as more
> -       intelligent multi-port cards such as those made by Digiboard
> -       and Stallion Technologies.  However, the default kernel only
> -       looks for the standard COM ports.</para>
> -
> -      <para>To see if your kernel recognizes any of your serial ports,
> -       watch for messages while the kernel is booting, or use the
> -       <command>/sbin/dmesg</command> command to replay the kernel's
> -       boot messages.  In particular, look for messages that start
> -       with the characters <literal>uart</literal> if you use
> -       &os;&nbsp;8.0 or higher, or <literal>sio</literal> for
> -       &os;&nbsp;7.4 or older.</para>
> +       the BocaBoard 1008 and 2016, as well as more intelligent
> +       multi-port cards such as those made by Digiboard and Stallion
> +       Technologies.  However, the default kernel only looks for the
> +       standard COM ports.</para>
> +
> +      <para>To see if the kernel recognizes the serial ports,
> +       watch for messages while the kernel is booting, or use
> +       <command>/sbin/dmesg</command> to replay the kernel's
> +       boot messages.  Look for messages that start with the
> +       characters <literal>uart</literal> for &os;&nbsp;8.0 or
> +       higher, or <literal>sio</literal> for &os;&nbsp;7.4 or
> +       older.</para>
>
>        <tip><para>To view just the messages that have the word
>         <literal>uart</literal> or <literal>sio</literal> depending
> @@ -570,7 +563,7 @@
>        </tip>
>
>        <para>For example, on a &os;&nbsp;7.<replaceable>X</replaceable>
> -       system with four serial ports, these are the serial-port
> +       system with four serial ports, these are the serial port
>         specific kernel boot messages:</para>
>
>        <screen>sio0 at 0x3f8-0x3ff irq 4 on isa
> @@ -582,31 +575,30 @@ sio2: type 16550A
>  sio3 at 0x2e8-0x2ef irq 9 on isa
>  sio3: type 16550A</screen>
>
> -      <para>If your kernel does not recognize all of your serial
> -       ports, you will probably need to configure your kernel
> -       in the <filename>/boot/device.hints</filename> file.  You can
> -       also comment-out or completely remove lines for devices you
> -       do not have.</para>
> -
> -      <para>Please refer to the &man.sio.4; manual page for
> -       more information on serial ports and multiport boards
> -       configuration.  Be careful if you are using a configuration
> -       file that was previously used for a different version of
> -       FreeBSD because the device flags and the syntax have changed
> -       between versions.</para>
> +      <para>If the kernel does not recognize all of the serial
> +       ports, configure <filename>/boot/device.hints</filename>.
> +       When editing this file, one can comment out or completely
> +       remove lines for devices that do not exist on the
> +       system.</para>
> +
> +      <para>Refer to &man.sio.4; for more information on
> +       configuring serial ports and multiport boards.  When using a
> +       configuration file that was previously used for a different
> +       version of &os; be aware that the device flags and the syntax
> +       may have changed between versions.</para>
>
>        <note>
>         <para><literal>port IO_COM1</literal> is a substitution for
>           <literal>port 0x3f8</literal>, <literal>IO_COM2</literal> is
>           <literal>0x2f8</literal>, <literal>IO_COM3</literal> is
>           <literal>0x3e8</literal>, and <literal>IO_COM4</literal> is
> -         <literal>0x2e8</literal>, which are fairly common port
> -         addresses for their respective serial ports; interrupts 4,
> -         3, 5, and 9 are fairly common interrupt request lines.  Also
> -         note that regular serial ports <emphasis>cannot</emphasis>
> -         share interrupts on ISA-bus PCs (multiport boards have
> +         <literal>0x2e8</literal>.  These are fairly common port
> +         addresses for their respective serial ports and interrupts
> +         4, 3, 5, and 9 are fairly common interrupt request lines.
> +         Regular serial ports <emphasis>cannot</emphasis> share
> +         interrupts on ISA-bus PCs.  Multiport boards have
>           on-board electronics that allow all the 16550A's on the
> -         board to share one or two interrupt request lines).</para>
> +         board to share one or two interrupt request lines.</para>
>        </note>
>
>      </sect2>
> @@ -615,13 +607,13 @@ sio3: type 16550A</screen>
>        <title>Device Special Files</title>
>
>        <para>Most devices in the kernel are accessed through
> -       <quote>device special files</quote>, which are located in the
> -       <filename>/dev</filename> directory.  The
> +       <quote>device special files</quote> which are located in
> +       <filename>/dev class="directory"</filename>.  The
>         <devicename>sio</devicename> devices are accessed through the
>         <filename>/dev/ttyu<replaceable>N</replaceable></filename>
>         (dial-in) and
>         <filename>/dev/cuau<replaceable>N</replaceable></filename>
> -       (call-out) devices.  FreeBSD also provides initialization
> +       (call-out) devices.  &os; also provides initialization
>         devices
>         (<filename>/dev/ttyu<replaceable>N</replaceable>.init</filename>
>         and
> @@ -635,9 +627,9 @@ sio3: type 16550A</screen>
>         such as <literal>crtscts</literal> for modems which use
>         <literal>RTS/CTS</literal> signaling for flow control.  The
>         locking devices are used to lock flags on ports to prevent
> -       users or programs changing certain parameters; see the manual
> -       pages &man.termios.4;, &man.sio.4;, and &man.stty.1; for
> -       information on the terminal settings, locking and initializing
> +       users or programs changing certain parameters.  Refer to
> +       &man.termios.4;, &man.sio.4;, and &man.stty.1; for
> +       information on terminal settings, locking and initializing
>         devices, and setting terminal options, respectively.</para>
>      </sect2>
>
> @@ -651,20 +643,20 @@ sio3: type 16550A</screen>
>        <para>The
>         <devicename>ttyu<replaceable>N</replaceable></devicename> (or
>         <devicename>cuau<replaceable>N</replaceable></devicename>)
> -       device is the regular device you will want to open for your
> -       applications.  When a process opens the device, it will have a
> -       default set of terminal I/O settings.  You can see these
> -       settings with the command</para>
> +       is the regular device to open for applications.  When a
> +       process opens the device, it will have a default set of
> +       terminal I/O settings.  These settings can be viewed with the
> +       command:</para>
>
>        <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>stty -a -f /dev/ttyu1</userinput></screen>
>
> -      <para>When you change the settings to this device, the settings
> -       are in effect until the device is closed.  When it is
> -       reopened, it goes back to the default set.  To make changes to
> -       the default set, you can open and adjust the settings of the
> +      <para>When the settings are changed for a device, the settings
> +       are in effect until the device is closed.  When the device is
> +       reopened, it goes back to the default set.  To permanently
> +       change the default set, open and adjust the settings of the
>         <quote>initial state</quote> device.  For example, to turn on
>         <option>CLOCAL</option> mode, 8 bit communication, and
> -       <option>XON/XOFF</option> flow control by default for
> +       <option>XON/XOFF</option> flow control for
>         <devicename>ttyu5</devicename>, type:</para>
>
>      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>stty -f /dev/ttyu5.init clocal cs8 ixon ixoff</userinput></screen>
> @@ -674,8 +666,8 @@ sio3: type 16550A</screen>
>         <secondary><filename>rc.serial</filename></secondary>
>        </indexterm>
>
> -      <para>System-wide initialization of the serial devices is
> -       controlled in <filename>/etc/rc.d/serial</filename>.  This
> +      <para>System-wide initialization of serial devices is
> +       controlled by <filename>/etc/rc.d/serial</filename>.  This
>         file affects the default settings of serial devices.</para>
>
>        <para>To prevent certain settings from being changed by an
> @@ -689,9 +681,8 @@ sio3: type 16550A</screen>
>         <devicename>ttyu5</devicename> and tries to change the speed
>         of the port will be stuck with 57600&nbsp;bps.</para>
>
> -      <para>Naturally, you should make the initial state and lock
> -       state devices writable only by the <username>root</username>
> -       account.</para>
> +      <para>The initial state and lock state devices should only be
> +       writable by <username>root</username>.</para>
>      </sect2>
>    </sect1>
>
> @@ -708,120 +699,85 @@ sio3: type 16550A</screen>
>      </sect1info>
>      <title>Terminals</title>
>
> -    <warning>
> -      <para>As of &os; 8.0, device nodes for serial ports have been
> -       renamed from
> -       <filename>/dev/cuad<replaceable>N</replaceable></filename> to
> -       <filename>/dev/cuau<replaceable>N</replaceable></filename> and
> -       from
> -       <filename>/dev/ttyd<replaceable>N</replaceable></filename> to
> -       <filename>/dev/ttyu<replaceable>N</replaceable></filename>.
> -       &os;&nbsp;7.X users will have to adapt the following
> -       documentation according to these changes.</para>
> -    </warning>
> -
>      <indexterm><primary>terminals</primary></indexterm>
>
>      <para>Terminals provide a convenient and low-cost way to access
> -      your FreeBSD system when you are not at the computer's console
> -      or on a connected network.  This section describes how to use
> -      terminals with FreeBSD.</para>
> +      a &os; system when not at the computer's console or on a
> +      connected network.  This section describes how to use terminals
> +      with &os;.</para>
>
>      <sect2 id="term-uses">
>        <title>Uses and Types of Terminals</title>
>
>        <para>The original &unix; systems did not have consoles.
> -       Instead, people logged in and ran programs through terminals
> -       that were connected to the computer's serial ports.  It is
> -       quite similar to using a modem and terminal software to dial
> -       into a remote system to do text-only work.</para>
> -
> -      <para>Today's PCs have consoles capable of high quality
> -       graphics, but the ability to establish a login session on a
> -       serial port still exists in nearly every &unix; style
> -       operating system today; FreeBSD is no exception.  By using a
> -       terminal attached to an unused serial port, you can log in and
> -       run any text program that you would normally run on the
> -       console or in an <command>xterm</command> window in the X
> -       Window System.</para>
> -
> -      <para>For the business user, you can attach many terminals to a
> -       FreeBSD system and place them on your employees' desktops.
> -       For a home user, a spare computer such as an older IBM PC or a
> -       &macintosh; can be a terminal wired into a more powerful
> -       computer running FreeBSD. You can turn what might otherwise be
> -       a single-user computer into a powerful multiple user
> -       system.</para>
> -
> -      <para>For FreeBSD, there are three kinds of terminals:</para>
> +       Instead, users logged in and ran programs through terminals
> +       that were connected to the computer's serial ports.</para>
>
> -      <itemizedlist>
> -       <listitem>
> -         <para><link linkend="term-dumb">Dumb terminals</link></para>
> -       </listitem>
> -
> -       <listitem>
> -         <para><link linkend="term-pcs">PCs acting as
> -             terminals</link></para>
> -       </listitem>
> -
> -       <listitem>
> -         <para><link linkend="term-x">X terminals</link></para>
> -       </listitem>
> -      </itemizedlist>
> -
> -      <para>The remaining subsections describe each kind.</para>
> +      <para>The ability to establish a login session on a serial port
> +       still exists in nearly every &unix;-like operating system
> +       today, including &os;.  By using a terminal attached to an
> +       unused serial port, a user can log in and run any text program
> +       that can normally be run on the console or in an
> +       <command>xterm</command> window.</para>
> +
> +      <para>Many terminals can be attached to a &os; system.  An older
> +       spare computer can be used as a terminal wired into a more
> +       powerful computer running &os;.  This can turn what might
> +       otherwise be a single-user computer into a powerful multiple
> +       user system.</para>
> +
> +      <para>This section describes three kinds of terminals supported
> +       by &os;: dumb terminals, computers acting as terminals, and X
> +       terminals.</para>
>
>        <sect3 id="term-dumb">
>         <title>Dumb Terminals</title>
>
> -       <para>Dumb terminals are specialized pieces of hardware that
> -         let you connect to computers over serial lines.  They are
> -         called <quote>dumb</quote> because they have only enough
> -         computational power to display, send, and receive text.  You
> -         cannot run any programs on them.  It is the computer to
> -         which you connect them that has all the power to run text
> +       <para>Dumb terminals are specialized hardware that connect to
> +         computers over serial lines.  They are called
> +         <quote>dumb</quote> because they have only enough
> +         computational power to display, send, and receive text.  No
> +         programs can be run on these devices.  Dumb terminals
> +         connect to a computer that has all the power to run text
>           editors, compilers, email, games, and so forth.</para>
>
>         <para>There are hundreds of kinds of dumb terminals made by
> -         many manufacturers, including Digital Equipment
> -         Corporation's VT-100 and Wyse's WY-75.  Just about any kind
> -         will work with FreeBSD. Some high-end terminals can even
> -         display graphics, but only certain software packages can
> -         take advantage of these advanced features.</para>
> +         many manufacturers, and just about any kind will work with
> +         &os;.  Some high-end terminals can even display graphics,
> +         but only certain software packages can take advantage of
> +         these advanced features.</para>
>
>         <para>Dumb terminals are popular in work environments where
> -         workers do not need access to graphical applications such as
> -         those provided by the X Window System.</para>
> +         workers do not need access to graphical applications.</para>
>        </sect3>
>
>        <sect3 id="term-pcs">
> -       <title>PCs Acting as Terminals</title>
> +       <title>Computers Acting as Terminals</title>
>
>         <para>If a <link linkend="term-dumb">dumb terminal</link> has
> -         just enough ability to display, send, and receive text, then
> -         certainly any spare personal computer can be a dumb
> -         terminal.  All you need is the proper cable and some
> -         <emphasis>terminal emulation</emphasis> software to run on
> -         the computer.</para>
> -
> -       <para>Such a configuration is popular in homes.  For example,
> -         if your spouse is busy working on your FreeBSD system's
> -         console, you can do some text-only work at the same time
> -         from a less powerful personal computer hooked up as a
> -         terminal to the FreeBSD system.</para>
> +         just enough ability to display, send, and receive text,
> +         any spare computer can be a dumb terminal.  All that is
> +         needed is the proper cable and some <emphasis>terminal
> +           emulation</emphasis> software to run on the
> +         computer.</para>
> +
> +       <para>This configuration can be useful.  For example, if one
> +         user is busy working at the &os; system's console, another
> +         user can do some text-only work at the same time from a
> +         less powerful personal computer hooked up as a terminal to
> +         the &os; system.</para>
>
>         <para>There are at least two utilities in the base-system of
>           &os; that can be used to work through a serial connection:
>           &man.cu.1; and &man.tip.1;.</para>
>
>         <para>To connect from a client system that runs &os; to the
> -         serial connection of another system, you can use:</para>
> +         serial connection of another system, use:</para>
>
>         <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cu -l <replaceable>serial-port-device</replaceable></userinput></screen>
>
>         <para>Where <quote>serial-port-device</quote> is the name of a
> -         special device file denoting a serial port of your system.
> +         special device file denoting a serial port on the system.
>           These device files are called
>           <devicename>/dev/cuau<replaceable>N</replaceable></devicename>.</para>
>
> @@ -830,17 +786,13 @@ sio3: type 16550A</screen>
>
>         <note>
>           <para>Note that device numbers in &os; start from zero and
> -           not one (like they do, for instance in &ms-dos;-derived
> -           systems).  This means that what &ms-dos;-based systems
> -           call <devicename>COM1</devicename> is usually
> +           not one.  This means that <devicename>COM1</devicename> is
>             <filename>/dev/cuau0</filename> in &os;.</para>
>         </note>
>
>         <note>
> -         <para>Some people prefer to use other programs, available
> -           through the Ports Collection.  The Ports include quite a
> -           few utilities which can work in ways similar to &man.cu.1;
> -           and &man.tip.1;, i.e., <filename
> +         <para>Some people prefer to use other programs available
> +           through the Ports Collection, such as <filename
>               role="package">comms/minicom</filename>.</para>
>         </note>
>        </sect3>
> @@ -854,48 +806,44 @@ sio3: type 16550A</screen>
>           being relegated to text-only applications, they can display
>           any X application.</para>
>
> -       <para>We introduce X terminals just for the sake of
> -         completeness.  However, this chapter does
> -         <emphasis>not</emphasis> cover setup, configuration, or use
> -         of X terminals.</para>
> +       <para>This chapter does <emphasis>not</emphasis> cover the
> +         setup, configuration, or use of X terminals.</para>
>        </sect3>
>      </sect2>
>
>      <sect2 id="term-config">
>        <title>Configuration</title>
>
> -      <para>This section describes what you need to configure on your
> -       FreeBSD system to enable a login session on a terminal.  It
> -       assumes you have already configured your kernel to support the
> -       serial port to which the terminal is connected&mdash;and that
> -       you have connected it.</para>
> -
> -      <para>Recall from <xref linkend="boot"/> that the
> -       <command>init</command> process is responsible for all process
> -       control and initialization at system startup.  One of the
> -       tasks performed by <command>init</command> is to read the
> -       <filename>/etc/ttys</filename> file and start a
> +      <para>This section describes how to configure a &os; system to
> +       enable a login session on a terminal.  It assumes that the
> +       kernel is configured to support the serial port to which the
> +       terminal is connected and that the terminal is
> +       connected.</para>
> +
> +      <para>The <command>init</command> process is responsible for all
> +       process control and initialization at system startup.  One of
> +       the tasks performed by <command>init</command> is to read
> +       <filename>/etc/ttys</filename> and start a
>         <command>getty</command> process on the available terminals.
>         The <command>getty</command> process is responsible for
>         reading a login name and starting the <command>login</command>
>         program.</para>
>
> -      <para>Thus, to configure terminals for your FreeBSD system the
> -       following steps should be taken as
> -       <username>root</username>:</para>
> +      <para>To configure terminals for a &os; system, the following
> +       steps should be taken as <username>root</username>:</para>
>
>        <procedure>
>         <step>
>           <para>Add a line to <filename>/etc/ttys</filename> for the
> -           entry in the <filename>/dev</filename> directory for the
> -           serial port if it is not already there.</para>
> +           entry in <filename class="directory">/dev</filename> for
> +           the serial port if it is not already there.</para>
>         </step>
>
>         <step>
>           <para>Specify that <command>/usr/libexec/getty</command>
>             be run on the port, and specify the appropriate
> -           <replaceable>getty</replaceable> type from the
> -           <filename>/etc/gettytab</filename> file.</para>
> +           <replaceable>getty</replaceable> type from
> +           <filename>/etc/gettytab</filename>.</para>
>         </step>
>
>         <step>
> @@ -912,53 +860,53 @@ sio3: type 16550A</screen>
>         </step>
>
>         <step>
> -         <para>Force <command>init</command> to reread the
> -           <filename>/etc/ttys</filename> file.</para>
> +         <para>Force <command>init</command> to reread
> +           <filename>/etc/ttys</filename>.</para>
>         </step>
>        </procedure>
>
> -      <para>As an optional step, you may wish to create a custom
> +      <para>As an optional step, create a custom
>         <replaceable>getty</replaceable> type for use in step 2 by
> -       making an entry in <filename>/etc/gettytab</filename>.  This
> -       chapter does not explain how to do so; you are encouraged to
> -       see the &man.gettytab.5; and the &man.getty.8; manual pages
> -       for more information.</para>
> +       making an entry in <filename>/etc/gettytab</filename>.  For
> +       more information, refer to &man.gettytab.5; and
> +       &man.getty.8;.</para>
>
>        <sect3 id="term-etcttys">
>         <title>Adding an Entry to
>           <filename>/etc/ttys</filename></title>
>
> -       <para>The <filename>/etc/ttys</filename> file lists all of the
> -         ports on your FreeBSD system where you want to allow logins.
> -         For example, the first virtual console
> -         <devicename>ttyv0</devicename> has an entry in this file.
> -         You can log in on the console using this entry.  This
> -         file also contains entries for the other virtual consoles,
> -         serial ports, and pseudo-ttys.  For a hardwired terminal,
> -         just list the serial port's <filename>/dev</filename> entry
> -         without the <filename>/dev</filename> part (for example,
> +       <para><filename>/etc/ttys</filename> lists all of the ports
> +         on the &os; system which allow logins.  For example, the
> +         first virtual console,
> +         <devicename>ttyv0</devicename>, has an entry in this file,
> +         allowing logins on the console.  This file also contains
> +         entries for the other virtual consoles, serial ports, and
> +         pseudo-ttys.  For a hardwired terminal,
> +         list the serial port's <filename
> +           class="directory">/dev</filename> entry without the
> +         <literal>/dev</literal> part.  For example,
>           <filename>/dev/ttyv0</filename> would be listed as
> -         <devicename>ttyv0</devicename>).</para>
> +         <literal>ttyv0</literal>.</para>
>
> -       <para>A default FreeBSD install includes an
> -         <filename>/etc/ttys</filename> file with support for the
> +       <para>A default &os; install includes an
> +         <filename>/etc/ttys</filename> with support for the
>           first four serial ports: <devicename>ttyu0</devicename>
> -         through <devicename>ttyu3</devicename>.  If you are
> -         attaching a terminal to one of those ports, you do not need
> -         to add another entry.</para>
> +         through <devicename>ttyu3</devicename>.  When
> +         attaching a terminal to one of those ports, this file does
> +         not need to be edited.</para>
>
>         <example id="ex-etc-ttys">
>           <title>Adding Terminal Entries to
>             <filename>/etc/ttys</filename></title>
>
> -         <para>Suppose we would like to connect two terminals to the
> -           system: a Wyse-50 and an old 286 IBM PC running
> +         <para>This example configures two terminals: a Wyse-50 and
> +           an old 286 IBM PC running
>             <application>Procomm</application> terminal software
> -           emulating a VT-100 terminal.  We connect the Wyse to the
> -           second serial port and the 286 to the sixth serial port (a
> -           port on a multiport serial card).  The corresponding
> -           entries in the <filename>/etc/ttys</filename> file would
> -           look like this:</para>
> +           emulating a VT-100 terminal.  The Wyse is connected to the
> +           second serial port and the 286 to the sixth serial port on
> +           a multiport serial card.  The corresponding entries in
> +           <filename>/etc/ttys</filename> would look like
> +           this:</para>
>
>           <programlisting>ttyu1<co
>               id="co-ttys-line1col1"/>  "/usr/libexec/getty std.38400"<co
> @@ -972,57 +920,56 @@ ttyu5   "/usr/libexec/getty std.19200"
>             <callout arearefs="co-ttys-line1col1">
>               <para>The first field normally specifies the name of
>                 the terminal special file as it is found in
> -               <filename>/dev</filename>.</para>
> +               <filename class="directory">/dev</filename>.</para>
>             </callout>
>
>             <callout arearefs="co-ttys-line1col2">
>               <para>The second field is the command to execute for
>                 this line, which is usually &man.getty.8;.
>                 <command>getty</command> initializes and opens the
> -               line, sets the speed, prompts for a user name and then
> -               executes the &man.login.1; program.</para>
> +               line, sets the speed, prompts for a user name, and
> +               then executes &man.login.1;.</para>
>
>               <para>The <command>getty</command> program accepts one
>                 (optional) parameter on its command line, the
>                 <replaceable>getty</replaceable> type.  A
>                 <replaceable>getty</replaceable> type configures
> -               characteristics on the terminal line, like bps rate
> -               and parity.  The <command>getty</command> program
> -               reads these characteristics from the file
> -               <filename>/etc/gettytab</filename>.</para>
> -
> -             <para>The file <filename>/etc/gettytab</filename>
> -               contains lots of entries for terminal lines both old
> -               and new.  In almost all cases, the entries that start
> -               with the text <literal>std</literal> will work for
> -               hardwired terminals.  These entries ignore parity.
> -               There is a <literal>std</literal> entry for each bps
> -               rate from 110 to 115200.  Of course, you can add your
> -               own entries to this file.  The &man.gettytab.5; manual
> -               page provides more information.</para>
> +               characteristics on the terminal line, like
> +               <acronym>bps</acronym> rate and parity.
> +               <command>getty</command> reads these characteristics
> +               from <filename>/etc/gettytab</filename>.</para>
> +
> +             <para><filename>/etc/gettytab</filename> contains many
> +               entries for terminal lines, both old and new.  In
> +               almost all cases, the entries that start with the
> +               text <literal>std</literal> will work for hardwired
> +               terminals as these entries ignore parity.  There is
> +               a <literal>std</literal> entry for each
> +               <acronym>bps</acronym> rate from 110 to 115200.
> +               &man.gettytab.5; provides more information.</para>
>
>               <para>When setting the <replaceable>getty</replaceable>
> -               type in the <filename>/etc/ttys</filename> file, make
> -               sure that the communications settings on the terminal
> +               type in <filename>/etc/ttys</filename>, make sure
> +               that the communications settings on the terminal
>                 match.</para>
>
> -             <para>For our example, the Wyse-50 uses no parity and
> +             <para>For this example, the Wyse-50 uses no parity and
>                 connects at 38400&nbsp;bps.  The 286&nbsp;PC uses no
>                 parity and connects at 19200&nbsp;bps.</para>
>             </callout>
>
>             <callout arearefs="co-ttys-line1col3">
>               <para>The third field is the type of terminal usually
> -               connected to that tty line.  For dial-up ports,
> +               connected to that terminal line.  For dial-up ports,
>                 <literal>unknown</literal> or
> -               <literal>dialup</literal> is typically used in this
> -               field since users may dial up with practically any
> -               type of terminal or software.  For hardwired
> -               terminals, the terminal type does not change, so you
> -               can put a real terminal type from the &man.termcap.5;
> -               database file in this field.</para>
> +               <literal>dialup</literal> is typically used since
> +               users may dial up with practically any type of
> +               terminal or software.  Since the terminal type does
> +               not change for hardwired terminals, a real terminal
> +               type from &man.termcap.5; can be used in this
> +               field.</para>
>
> -             <para>For our example, the Wyse-50 uses the real
> +             <para>For this example, the Wyse-50 uses the real
>                 terminal type while the 286 PC running
>                 <application>Procomm</application> will be set to
>                 emulate at VT-100. </para>
> @@ -1030,30 +977,31 @@ ttyu5   "/usr/libexec/getty std.19200"
>
>             <callout arearefs="co-ttys-line1col4">
>               <para>The fourth field specifies if the port should be
> -               enabled.  Putting <literal>on</literal> here will have
> -               the <command>init</command> process start the program
> -               in the second field, <command>getty</command>.  If you
> -               put <literal>off</literal> in this field, there will
> -               be no <command>getty</command>, and hence no logins on
> -               the port.</para>
> +               enabled.  If set to <literal>on</literal>, the
> +               <command>init</command> process will start the program
> +               in the second field, <command>getty</command>.  If
> +               this field is set to <literal>off</literal>, there
> +               will be no <command>getty</command>, and hence no
> +               logins on the port.</para>
>             </callout>
>
>             <callout arearefs="co-ttys-line1col5">
>               <para>The final field is used to specify whether the
> -               port is secure.  Marking a port as secure means that
> -               you trust it enough to allow the
> -               <username>root</username> account (or any account with
> -               a user ID of 0) to login from that port.  Insecure
> -               ports do not allow <username>root</username> logins.
> -               On an insecure port, users must login from
> -               unprivileged accounts and then use &man.su.1; or a
> -               similar mechanism to gain superuser privileges.</para>
> -
> -             <para>It is highly recommended that you use
> -               <quote>insecure</quote>
> -               even for terminals that are behind locked doors.  It
> -               is quite easy to login and use <command>su</command>
> -               if you need superuser privileges.</para>
> +               port is secure.  Marking a port as
> +               <literal>secure</literal> means that it is trusted
> +               enough to allow <username>root</username>, or any
> +               account with a <acronym>UID</acronym> of 0, to login
> +               from that port.  Insecure ports do not allow
> +               <username>root</username> logins.  On an insecure
> +               port, users must login from unprivileged accounts and
> +               then use &man.su.1; or a similar mechanism to gain
> +               superuser privileges.</para>
> +
> +             <para>It is highly recommended to use
> +               <literal>insecure</literal>, even for terminals that
> +               are behind locked doors.  It is quite easy to login
> +               and use <command>su</command> when superuser
> +               privileges are needed.</para>
>             </callout>
>           </calloutlist>
>         </example>
> @@ -1063,34 +1011,34 @@ ttyu5   "/usr/libexec/getty std.19200"
>         <title>Force <command>init</command> to Reread
>           <filename>/etc/ttys</filename></title>
>
> -       <para>After making the necessary changes to the
> -         <filename>/etc/ttys</filename> file you should send a SIGHUP
> +       <para>After making any changes to
> +         <filename>/etc/ttys</filename>, send a SIGHUP
>           (hangup) signal to the <command>init</command> process to
> -         force it to re-read its configuration file.  For
> -         example:</para>
> +         force it to re-read its configuration file:</para>
>
>         <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>kill -HUP 1</userinput></screen>
>
>         <note>
>           <para><command>init</command> is always the first process
> -           run on a system, therefore it will always have PID
> -           1.</para>
> +           run on a system, therefore it will always have a process
> +           ID of 1.</para>
>         </note>
>
>         <para>If everything is set up correctly, all cables are in
>           place, and the terminals are powered up, then a
>           <command>getty</command> process should be running on each
> -         terminal and you should see login prompts on your terminals
> -         at this point.</para>
> +         terminal and login prompts should be available on each
> +         terminal.</para>
>        </sect3>
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