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Date:      Sat, 13 Apr 2019 00:54:56 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Glen Barber <gjb@FreeBSD.org>
To:        src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable-11@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r346171 - stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes
Message-ID:  <201904130054.x3D0su1n020468@repo.freebsd.org>

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Author: gjb
Date: Sat Apr 13 00:54:56 2019
New Revision: 346171
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/346171

Log:
  Fix some grammar nits.
  
  Submitted by:	adamw
  Sponsored by:	The FreeBSD Foundation

Modified:
  stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml

Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml	Fri Apr 12 23:22:27 2019	(r346170)
+++ stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml	Sat Apr 13 00:54:56 2019	(r346171)
@@ -212,7 +212,7 @@
 	names.</para>
 
       <para revision="344020">The &man.pfctl.8; utility has been
-	updated to provide more clear output and reference the
+	updated to provide clearer output and reference the
 	<literal>net.pf.request_maxcount</literal> &man.sysctl.8;
 	if a defined table is too large.</para>
 
@@ -221,9 +221,8 @@
 	names.</para>
 
       <para revision="345561">The &man.sh.1; utility has been updated
-	to add the <literal>pipefail</literal> option which allows
-	checking the exit status of all commands in a pipeline more
-	easily.</para>
+	to add the <literal>pipefail</literal> option which simplifies
+	checking the exit status of all commands in a pipeline.</para>
 
       <para revision="345878">The &man.patch.1; utility has been
 	updated to exit successfully if the input patch file is



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