Date: Fri, 6 Jul 2001 19:10:47 +0300 (EEST) From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@ceid.upatras.gr> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Subject: docs/28779: a few whitespace and typo fixes for articles/filtering-bridge Message-ID: <200107061610.f66GAlJ03051@hades.hell.gr>
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>Number: 28779
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: a few whitespace and typo fixes for articles/filtering-bridge
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Fri Jul 06 11:40:01 PDT 2001
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Giorgos Keramidas
>Release: FreeBSD 5.0-CURRENT i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD hades.hell.gr 5.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 5.0-CURRENT #0: Sun Jun 24 18:34:43 EEST 2001 root@hades.hell.gr:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/CHARON i386
>Description:
I just finished reading the source of the filtering-bridge
article and these are a few minor whitespace fixes and typos
that I found.
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/filtering-bridges/article.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/filtering-bridges/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
diff -u -r1.1 article.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/filtering-bridges/article.sgml 2001/06/25 15:04:01 1.1
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/filtering-bridges/article.sgml 2001/07/06 16:02:40
@@ -50,8 +50,8 @@
that routers can only route traffic between different subnets.
Also, subnets can only be made by by cutting an existing space in
half or defining a new space that is typically unroutable (see
- <ulink url="ftp://nis.nsf.net/internet/documents/rfc/rfc1918.txt">RFC 1918</ulink>
- ). This wastes half of the useful addresses (or at least puts
+ <ulink url="ftp://nis.nsf.net/internet/documents/rfc/rfc1918.txt">RFC 1918</ulink>).
+ This wastes half of the useful addresses (or at least puts
them on the "wrong" side of the router -- the thing that is
doing the packet filtering that makes the inside network safe).
Using a bridge costs some CPU cycles, but makes all of the
@@ -267,7 +267,7 @@
${ipfw} add pass tcp from any to mailhost 25 in via ${oif}
# UDP section
-# Pass the "quarantine" range"
+# Pass the "quarantine" range.
${ipfw} add pass udp from any to any 49152-65535 in via ${oif}
# Pass DNS. Only if you have name servers inside.
#${ipfw} add pass udp from any to any 53 in via ${oif}
@@ -349,7 +349,7 @@
the items that were discussed by Luigi Rizzo in his Dummynet lecture at
FreeBSDcon '99 and by Mark Murray during his Network Security lecture.
In addition, for quite some time now I have been putting together
- filtering bridges for friends and coleagues who were getting DSL
+ filtering bridges for friends and colleagues who were getting DSL
connections for their home.</para>
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