Date: Sat, 20 Aug 2011 14:10:11 GMT From: Hans Petter Selasky <hselasky@c2i.net> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/159898: [patch] libusb.3 whitespace, markup, grammar fixes Message-ID: <201108201410.p7KEAB8n025467@freefall.freebsd.org>
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The following reply was made to PR docs/159898; it has been noted by GNATS. From: Hans Petter Selasky <hselasky@c2i.net> To: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> Cc: "bug-followup@freebsd.org" <bug-followup@freebsd.org> Subject: Re: docs/159898: [patch] libusb.3 whitespace, markup, grammar fixes Date: Sat, 20 Aug 2011 16:06:05 +0200 On Friday 19 August 2011 17:22:08 Benjamin Kaduk wrote: > (was: Re: Fwd: svn commit: r224917 - head/lib/libusb) > > On Fri, 19 Aug 2011, Hans Petter Selasky wrote: > > On Friday 19 August 2011 05:40:46 Benjamin Kaduk wrote: > >> Dear Hans Petter, > >> > >> I saw a couple grammar and style issues as this went by, and ended up > >> going through the whole man page. Could you take a look at docs/159898 > >> and make sure I didn't change anything factually incorrectly? > >> > >> Thanks, > >> > >> Ben Kaduk > > > > Looks good! > > > > One more change I would suggest: > > > > +A convenience function to open a device with vendor and producd IDs > > > > Into: > > > > +A convenience function to open a device by vendor and product IDs > > > > --HPS > > Updated patch with comments from hps -- thanks for catching it! > > -Ben Looks good. Who will commit it? --HPS
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