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Date:      Tue, 31 Dec 2013 11:01:09 +0100
From:      Marc Fonvieille <blackend@freebsd.org>
To:        Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com>
Cc:        svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org
Subject:   Re: svn commit: r43404 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall
Message-ID:  <20131231100109.GA1900@emphyrio.blackend.org>
In-Reply-To: <alpine.BSF.2.00.1312301735530.58780@wonkity.com>
References:  <201312301751.rBUHpsRX041814@svn.freebsd.org> <alpine.BSF.2.00.1312301735530.58780@wonkity.com>

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On Mon, Dec 30, 2013 at 05:39:43PM -0700, Warren Block wrote:
> On Mon, 30 Dec 2013, Marc Fonvieille wrote:
> 
> > Author: blackend
> > Date: Mon Dec 30 17:51:54 2013
> > New Revision: 43404
> > URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/43404
> >
> > Log:
> >  Add some missing <quote></quote> tags, and remove useless "".
> >
> > Modified:
> >  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
> >
> > Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
> > ==============================================================================
> > --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml	Mon Dec 30 17:10:07 2013	(r43403)
> > +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml	Mon Dec 30 17:51:54 2013	(r43404)
> > @@ -1353,7 +1353,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
> > 	    <row>
> > 	      <entry>BSD</entry>
> > 	      <entry>BSD Labels without an MBR, sometimes called
> > -		"dangerously dedicated mode".  See
> > +		<quote>dangerously dedicated mode</quote>.  See
> > 		&man.bsdlabel.8;.</entry>
> > 	    </row>
> >
> > @@ -1494,7 +1494,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
> > 	  for a 20G target disk.  If more space is available on the
> > 	  target disk, larger swap or <filename>/var</filename>
> > 	  partitions may be useful.  Labels shown here are prefixed
> > -	  with <literal>ex</literal> for "example", but readers
> > +	  with <literal>ex</literal> for example, but readers
> > 	  should use other unique label values as described
> > 	  above.</para>
> 
> On this one, there should be quotes.  It's not "for example" but 
> "ex" standing for "example".  So
>

Indeed, I thought at it later this night.  Just fixed it.

-- 
Marc



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