Date: Fri, 17 Aug 2001 08:15:47 -0700 (PDT) From: John Murphy <jfm@blueyonder.co.uk> To: freebsd-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Subject: docs/29806: Handbook Chapter 12 (Disks) minor changes Message-ID: <200108171515.f7HFFlv68942@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 29806 >Category: docs >Synopsis: Handbook Chapter 12 (Disks) minor changes >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Fri Aug 17 08:20:01 PDT 2001 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: John Murphy >Release: 4.x Stable >Organization: >Environment: >Description: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml Revision 1.52 Removed <filename> and <command> elements where they were within <title>. Fixed some minor typos. Also, there seems to be a problem with the way <userinput> and <application> elements appear when used within <procedure><step>. See 12.5.1 steps 2 and 3. http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks-adding.html >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: Apply the following diff to: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml --- chapter Fri Aug 17 16:01:01 2001 +++ chapter.patched Fri Aug 17 16:01:01 2001 @@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ <indexterm><primary>IDE</primary></indexterm> <indexterm><primary>SCSI</primary></indexterm> <indexterm><primary>RAID</primary></indexterm> - <indexterm><primary>fash memory</primary></indexterm> + <indexterm><primary>flash memory</primary></indexterm> <para>Physical drives come in two main flavors, <acronym>IDE</acronym>, or <acronym>SCSI</acronym>; but there are also drives backed by RAID controllers, flash memory, and so @@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ </row> <row> <entry>IDE CDROM drives</entry> - <entry><literal>acd</literal> from 4.1-RELEASE, + <entry><literal>acd</literal> from 4.0-RELEASE, <literal>wcd</literal> before 4.0-RELEASE.</entry> </row> <row> @@ -249,7 +249,7 @@ drives.</para> <sect2 id="disks-fstab"> - <title>The <filename>fstab</filename> File</title> + <title>The fstab File</title> <indexterm> <primary>filesystems</primary> <secondary>mounted with fstab</secondary> @@ -455,7 +455,7 @@ </sect2> <sect2 id="disks-umount"> - <title>The <command>umount</command> Command</title> + <title>The umount Command</title> <indexterm> <primary>filesystems</primary> <secondary>unmounting</secondary> @@ -498,7 +498,7 @@ <para>Lets say we want to add a new SCSI disk to a machine that currently only has a single drive. First turn off the computer and install the drive in the computer following the instructions - of the computer, controller, and drive manufacturer. Due the + of the computer, controller, and drive manufacturer. Due to the wide variations of procedures to do this, the details are beyond the scope of this document.</para> @@ -1104,7 +1104,7 @@ <para>Which tool to use to burn the CD depends on whether your CD burner is ATAPI or something else. ATAPI CD burners use the <command><link linkend="burncd">burncd</link></command> program that is part of - the base system. SCSI and USB CD burners should use the + the base system. SCSI and USB CD burners should use <command><link linkend="cdrecord">cdrecord</link></command> from the <port>sysutils/cdrtools</port> port.</para> >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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