Date: Fri, 21 Dec 2001 16:40:02 -0800 (PST) From: Chern Lee <chern@freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/32578: A _really_ petty change to the front page of the website Message-ID: <200112220040.fBM0e2Z07763@freefall.freebsd.org>
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The following reply was made to PR docs/32578; it has been noted by GNATS. From: Chern Lee <chern@FreeBSD.org> To: Ceri <setantae@submonkey.net> Cc: <FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.ORG> Subject: Re: docs/32578: A _really_ petty change to the front page of the website Date: Fri, 21 Dec 2001 16:35:32 -0800 (PST) I'm not sure if I follow what you are trying to say... (FreeBSD can) run a huge variety of applications. This makes perfect sense. But these are not complete sentence, just fragments. (FreeBSD) runs a huge variety of applications. - makes sense As a fragment, both run and runs make sense, because they can be prefixed with something to make it complete. I think it's fine the way it is. - chern On Fri, 7 Dec 2001, Ceri wrote: > The bulletpoint list on the home page of www.FreeBSD.org contains a list of > some of the good points regarding FreeBSD. > > I believe that one of them therefore contains a grammatical error. > Consider the implied notions : > > 1. (FreeBSD has) Cutting edge features > 2. (FreeBSD has) Powerful Internet solutions > 3. (FreeBSD can) Run a huge a variety of applications > 4. (FreeBSD is) Easy to install > > I don't like number 3. > > Ceri > > >How-To-Repeat: > Visit http://www.FreeBSD.org in a browser. > >Fix: > > --- www/en/index.xsl.old Fri Dec 7 14:29:23 2001 > +++ www/en/index.xsl Fri Dec 7 14:33:16 2001 > @@ -250,7 +250,7 @@ > <a href="gallery/gallery.html">gallery</a> for examples of > FreeBSD powered applications and services.</p> > > - <h2><font color="#990000">Run a huge variety of > + <h2><font color="#990000">Runs a huge variety of > applications</font></h2> > > <p>The quality of FreeBSD combined with today's low-cost, > >Release-Note: > >Audit-Trail: > >Unformatted: > > To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org > with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message > To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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