Date: Sun, 13 Jan 2013 06:42:44 -0800 (PST) From: Dru Lavigne <dru.lavigne@att.net> To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: [patch] content changes to X11 chapter Message-ID: <1358088164.72486.YahooMailClassic@web184906.mail.gq1.yahoo.com>
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=0A> On Fri, Jan 11, 2013 at 02:31:52PM -0800, Dru Lavigne=0A> wrote:=0A> >= Attached is the svn diff for the X11 chapter. This=0A> represents a=0A> > = complete content update of this chapter.=0A> > =0A> > Igor is mostly happy.= I think the remaining indent=0A> errors are false=0A> > warnings as they o= nly occur when an inline tag is in=0A> the previous=0A> > <para>.=0A> > =0A= > > I did not verify the widescreen settings. I think the=0A> i810 section = is=0A> > correct. The KDM section needs more content. Other than=0A> that, = it is a=0A> > decent first pass at bringing this chapter into the=0A> 21st = century.=0A> >=0A> =0A> Some thoughts:=0A> =0A> - the whole diff will be di= fficult to read for a translator:=0A> section=0A> =A0 moves, whitespace & c= ontent changes, etc.=A0=0A> It will be important to=0A> =A0 commit in separ= ate parts: for example: 1st section=0A> moves/removals, 2nd=0A> =A0 additio= n & content changes and 3rd=0A> whitespace/indentation changes;=0A> =0A> - = you removed the prerequisite of knowing how to use ports,=0A> I think it's= =0A> =A0 important to know how to get a ports tree before=0A> using the por= ts;=0A> =0A> - you removed the way to get a localized keyboard for people= =0A> not using a=0A> =A0 desktop manager.=A0 Well this configuration is not= =0A> easy to guess for a=0A> =A0 newcomer.=A0 Maybe it can be kept somewher= e in the=0A> chapter.=0A> =0A> - What is # in Crtl+Alt+F#?=0A=0A=0APlease n= ote that the whitespace changes were sent as a separate patch ([patch] whit= e space only fix for handbook x11 chapter) on the 10th. It is my understand= ing that the first patch will be applied to the handbook repo while the sec= ond content patch will most likely be applied to the print edition repo.=0A= =0ACheers,=0A=0ADru
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