Date: Thu, 16 May 2002 13:11:22 -0400 From: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org> To: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@ceid.upatras.gr> Cc: pepper@reppep.com, FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: [PATCH] <http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/cvs. operations.html> Message-ID: <20020516131122.516afea5.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <20020516164330.GA96701@hades.hell.gr> References: <p05111901b908d6f0c7e5@[64.81.19.109]> <20020516164330.GA96701@hades.hell.gr>
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On Thu, 16 May 2002 19:43:30 +0300 Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@ceid.upatras.gr> wrote: > On 2002-05-15 23:29, Chris Pepper <pepper@reppep.com> wrote: > > You don't really need the whitespace change (moving 'or' at the > beginning of the last paragraph line). > > You might want to make `this' mode explicit, with something like: > > If you checked out a ``point in time'', then > <application>cvs</application> will do nothing, unless ... > > What do you think? I think, and not to discourage contributions, as we need them, that Chris review the FreeBSD Documentation Project Primer before this change be evaulated. The only reason I say this, is because it seems more like this document is getting a modification in its html state over the sgml state it should be. Chris, could you please review it at http://www.FreeBSD.org/docproj/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer so you can have a better understanding of DocBook, SGML, and the wonderful ways its put to use in the primer. > > - Giorgos > -- Tom (Darklogik) Rhodes www.FreeBSD.org -The Power To Serve www.Pittgoth.com -Pittgoth Discussion Portal trhodes@{Pittgoth.com, FreeBSD.org} PGP key by www: http://www.pittgoth.com/~darklogik/darklogik.key To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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