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Date:      Thu, 4 Apr 2002 16:32:27 +0300
From:      Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org>
To:        freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org
Subject:   RFC: Removing "try and <verb>" from the docs
Message-ID:  <20020404133226.GA8872@hades.hell.gr>

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I've tried to remove "try and <verb>" from the English part of the
documentation.  The patch below shows what changes I made.  Since this
touches several files, I'd be glad to hear any comments or suggestions
you might have.  If nobody objects to this, I'll try to have it
committed in a few days.

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RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.=
sgml,v
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diff -u -r1.106 article.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.sgml	27 Mar 2002 12:4=
0:02 -0000	1.106
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.sgml	3 Apr 2002 22:10=
:59 -0000
@@ -1683,7 +1683,7 @@
 	    course) but CVS makes it unnecessary to have an ongoing
 	    dispute raging when it is far easier to simply reverse the
 	    disputed change, get everyone calmed down again and then
-	    try and figure out how best to proceed.  If the change
+	    try to figure out what is the best way to proceed.  If the change
 	    turns out to be the best thing after all, it can be easily
 	    brought back. If it turns out not to be, then the users
 	    did not have to live with the bogus change in the tree
@@ -1740,7 +1740,7 @@
 	    to continue to attract new members.  There will be
 	    occasions when, despite everyone's very best attempts at
 	    self-control, tempers are lost and angry words are
-	    exchanged, and the best we can do is try and minimize the
+	    exchanged.  The best thing that can be done in such cases is to attem=
pt to minimize the
 	    effects of this until everyone has cooled back down.  That
 	    means that you should not air your angry words in public
 	    and you should not forward private correspondence to
Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.sgml
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RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.sgml=
,v
retrieving revision 1.480
diff -u -r1.480 article.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.sgml	27 Mar 2002 01:16:38=
 -0000	1.480
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.sgml	3 Apr 2002 22:11:27 =
-0000
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@
 	  <para>If you run FreeBSD-current and have a good Internet
 	    connection, there is a machine <hostid
 	      role=3D"fqdn">current.FreeBSD.org</hostid> which builds a full
-	    release once a day &mdash; every now and again, try and install
+	    release once a day &mdash; every now and again, try to install
 	    the latest release from it and report any failures in the
 	    process.</para>
 	</listitem>
Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/cvs-freebsd/article.sgml
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diff -u -r1.1 article.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/cvs-freebsd/article.sgml	7 Jan 2002 20:15:05 -=
0000	1.1
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/cvs-freebsd/article.sgml	3 Apr 2002 22:12:46 -=
0000
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@
=20
       <para>Next, we will copy the FreeBSD <filename>CVSROOT</filename>
         sources into your own repository. If you are accustomed to
-        <application>CVS</application>, it might occur to you to try and
+        <application>CVS</application>, you might be thinking that you can=
 just
         import the scripts, in an attempt to make synchronizing with later
         versions easier. However, it turns out that
         <application>CVS</application> has a deficiency in this area:
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.sgml,v
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diff -u -r1.8 article.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/filtering-bridges/article.sgml	1 Apr 2002 23:4=
2:04 -0000	1.8
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/filtering-bridges/article.sgml	3 Apr 2002 22:1=
3:16 -0000
@@ -181,7 +181,7 @@
       will not be activated and the firewall, being in 'open' mode, will n=
ot
       avoid any operations.</para>
=20
-    <para>If there are any problems, you should try and sort them out now
+    <para>If there are any problems, you should try to sort them out now
       before proceeding.</para>
   </sect1>
=20
@@ -322,7 +322,7 @@
=20
     <para>That is, drop packets that are coming in from the outside claimi=
ng
       to be from our network. This is something that you would commonly do=
 to
-      be sure that someone does not try and evade the packet filter, by
+      be sure that someone does not try to evade the packet filter, by
       generating nefarious packets that look like they are from the inside.
       The problem with that is that there is <emphasis>at least</emphasis>=
 one
       host on the outside interface that you do not want to ignore: the
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/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.26
diff -u -r1.26 chapter.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/policies/chapter.sgml	18 Feb =
2002 01:57:39 -0000	1.26
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/policies/chapter.sgml	3 Apr 2=
002 22:14:08 -0000
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
       to the maintainer for review before being committed.  Only if the
       maintainer does not respond for an unacceptable period of time, to
       several emails, will it be acceptable to commit changes without revi=
ew
-      by the maintainer.  However, it is suggested that you try and have t=
he
+      by the maintainer.  However, it is suggested that you try to have the
       changes reviewed  by someone else if at all possible.</para>
=20
     <para>It is of course not acceptable to add a person or group as
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RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/tools/ch=
apter.sgml,v
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diff -u -r1.18 chapter.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/tools/chapter.sgml	27 Mar 200=
2 01:16:45 -0000	1.18
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/tools/chapter.sgml	3 Apr 2002=
 22:15:18 -0000
@@ -481,7 +481,7 @@
=20
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>Create an optimised version of the executable.  The
-	    compiler performs various clever tricks to try and produce
+	    compiler performs various clever tricks in an attempt to produce
 	    an executable that runs faster than normal.  You can add a
 	    number after the <option>-O</option> to specify a higher
 	    level of optimisation, but this often exposes bugs in the
@@ -1152,7 +1152,7 @@
 	so that the application can be installed in the correct
 	directory when it has been correctly compiled.</para>
=20
-      <para>This is a slightly confusing subject to try and explain.
+      <para>This is a slightly confusing subject to explain.
 	If you do not quite understand how <command>make</command>
 	works, the best thing to do is to write a simple program like
 	<quote>hello world</quote> and a make file like the one above
@@ -1721,8 +1721,8 @@
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       <para>Although Emacs does have menus, it is well worth learning
 	the key bindings, as it is much quicker when you are editing
-	something to press a couple of keys than to try and find the
-	mouse and then click on the right place.  And, when you are
+	something to press a couple of keys than finding the
+	mouse and then clicking on the right place.  And, when you are
 	talking to seasoned Emacs users, you will find they often
 	casually throw around expressions like <quote><literal>M-x
 	    replace-s RET foo RET bar RET</literal></quote> so it is
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retrieving revision 1.423
diff -u -r1.423 book.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml	27 Mar 2002 01:16:46 -0000	1.423
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml	4 Apr 2002 13:24:54 -0000
@@ -705,8 +705,14 @@
=20
             <listitem>
               <para>The document's format.  We produce the documentation i=
n a
-                number of different output formats to try and make it as
-                flexible as possible.  The current formats are;</para>
+                number of different output formats.  Each format has its o=
wn
+                advantages and disadvantages.  Some formats are better sui=
ted
+                for online reading, while others are beautiful when printe=
d on
+                paper.  Having the documentation available in any of these
+                formats ensures that our readers will be able to read the
+                parts they are interested in, either online on their monit=
or,
+                or after printing the documents on paper.  The current for=
mats
+                are:</para>
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               <informaltable frame=3D"none">
                 <tgroup cols=3D"2">
@@ -970,7 +976,7 @@
               <para>Channel <literal>#FreeBSD</literal> on
                 <ulink URL=3D"http://www.efnet.org/index.php">EFNet</ulink>;
                 is a FreeBSD forum, but do not go there for tech
-                support or to try and get folks there to help you avoid
+                support or try to get folks there to help you avoid
                 the pain of reading man pages or doing your own research.
                 It is a chat channel, first and foremost, and topics there
                 are just as likely to involve sex, sports or nuclear
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diff -u -r1.30 chapter.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-primer/chapter.sgml	27 Mar 2002 0=
1:16:46 -0000	1.30
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-primer/chapter.sgml	3 Apr 2002 22=
:21:22 -0000
@@ -143,8 +143,8 @@
       <para>This processing simply confirms that the choice of elements, t=
heir=20
 	ordering, and so on, conforms to that listed in the DTD.  It does
 	<emphasis>not</emphasis> check that you have used
-	<emphasis>appropriate</emphasis> markup for the content.  If you were
-	to try and mark up all the filenames in your document as function
+	<emphasis>appropriate</emphasis> markup for the content.  If you
+	tried to mark up all the filenames in your document as function
 	names, the parser would not flag this as an error (assuming, of
 	course, that your DTD defines elements for filenames and functions,
 	and that they are allowed to appear in the same place).</para>
@@ -694,7 +694,7 @@
       <sect3>
 	<title><filename>catalog</filename> files</title>
 =09
-	<para>If you use the syntax above and try and process this document
+	<para>If you use the syntax above and process this document
 	  using an SGML processor, the processor will need to have some way of
 	  turning the FPI into the name of the file on your computer that
 	  contains the DTD.</para>
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diff -u -r1.10 chapter.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.sgml	26 Mar 2002 22:=
31:55 -0000	1.10
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.sgml	3 Apr 2002 22:2=
2:35 -0000
@@ -242,7 +242,7 @@
 	    separate directories prepares for future plans for the Handbook.
 	    Specifically, it will soon be possible to include images in each
 	    chapter.  It makes more sense for each image to be stored in a
-	    directory with the text for the chapter than to try and keep the
+	    directory with the text for the chapter than keeping the
 	    text for all the chapters, and all the images, in one large
 	    directory.  Namespace collisions would be inevitable, and it is
 	    easier to work with several directories with a few files in them
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diff -u -r1.17 chapter.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/translations/chapter.sgml	15 Mar 2002 =
07:57:16 -0000	1.17
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/translations/chapter.sgml	3 Apr 2002 2=
2:23:17 -0000
@@ -319,7 +319,7 @@
         </orderedlist>
 	 =20
 	<para>If there are any problems then whoever is looking at the
-	  submission will get back to you to try and work them out.</para>
+	  submission will get back to you to work them out.</para>
=20
 	<para>If there are no problems your translation will be committed
 	  as soon as possible.</para>
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diff -u -r1.59 chapter.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.sgml	26 Mar 2002 23:37:38=
 -0000	1.59
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.sgml	3 Apr 2002 22:23:39 =
-0000
@@ -890,7 +890,7 @@
       send&mdash;some of them have a specific meaning, others are interpre=
ted
       by the application, and the application's documentation will tell you
       how that application interprets signals.  You can only send a signal=
 to
-      a process that you own.  If you try and send a signal to someone els=
e's
+      a process that you own.  If you send a signal to someone else's
       process it will be ignored.  The exception to this is the
       <username>root</username> user, who can send signals to everyone's
       processes.</para>
@@ -983,7 +983,7 @@
 &prompt.root; <userinput>/bin/kill -s HUP 198</userinput></screen>
=20
 	<para>In common most with Unix commands, &man.kill.1; will not print any
-	  output if it is successful.  If you try and send a signal to a
+	  output if it is successful.  If you send a signal to a
 	  process that you do not own then you will see <errorname>kill:
 	    <replaceable>PID</replaceable>: Operation not
 	    permitted</errorname>.  If you mistype the PID you will either
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diff -u -r1.471 chapter.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/contrib/chapter.sgml	27 Mar 2002 01:16:4=
8 -0000	1.471
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/contrib/chapter.sgml	3 Apr 2002 22:23:56=
 -0000
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@
 	  <para>If you run FreeBSD-current and have a good Internet
 	    connection, there is a machine <hostid
 	      role=3D"fqdn">current.FreeBSD.org</hostid> which builds a full
-	    release once a day &mdash; every now and again, try and install
+	    release once a day &mdash; every now and again, try to install
 	    the latest release from it and report any failures in the
 	    process.</para>
 	</listitem>
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diff -u -r1.117 chapter.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.sgml	1 Apr 2002 14:=
39:22 -0000	1.117
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.sgml	3 Apr 2002 22:=
24:13 -0000
@@ -1048,7 +1048,7 @@
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 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>make -DNOPROFILE=3Dtrue installworld</us=
erinput></screen>
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-	<para>otherwise it would try and install profiled libraries that
+	<para>otherwise it would try to install profiled libraries that
 	  had not been built during the <command>make buildworld</command>
 	  phase.</para>
       </note>
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r.sgml,v
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diff -u -r1.64 chapter.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml	15 Mar 2002 07=
:46:21 -0000	1.64
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml	3 Apr 2002 22:=
24:58 -0000
@@ -481,7 +481,7 @@
 	to that point suffering rather severely from almost a year's worth
 	of neglect.  As the patchkit swelled ever more uncomfortably with
 	each passing day, we were in unanimous agreement that something
-	had to be done and decided to try and assist Bill by providing
+	had to be done and decided to assist Bill by providing
 	this interim <quote>cleanup</quote> snapshot.  Those plans came to
 	a rude halt when Bill Jolitz suddenly decided to withdraw his
 	sanction from the project without any clear indication of what
Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/policies/chapter.sgml
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ml,v
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diff -u -r1.25 chapter.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/policies/chapter.sgml	28 Feb 2002 03:47:=
08 -0000	1.25
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/policies/chapter.sgml	3 Apr 2002 22:25:1=
6 -0000
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
       to the maintainer for review before being committed.  Only if the
       maintainer does not respond for an unacceptable period of time, to
       several emails, will it be acceptable to commit changes without revi=
ew
-      by the maintainer.  However, it is suggested that you try and have t=
he
+      by the maintainer.  However, it is suggested that you try to have the
       changes reviewed  by someone else if at all possible.</para>
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     <para>It is of course not acceptable to add a person or group as
%%%

Giorgos Keramidas                       FreeBSD Documentation Project
keramida@{freebsd.org,ceid.upatras.gr}  http://www.FreeBSD.org/docproj/

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