Date: Sun, 19 Aug 2018 12:09:32 +0000 (UTC) From: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r52159 - in head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook: bsdinstall config eresources Message-ID: <201808191209.w7JC9WhW081597@repo.freebsd.org>
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Author: bcr Date: Sun Aug 19 12:09:31 2018 New Revision: 52159 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/52159 Log: Re-wrap lines that went over the line limit. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/eresources/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Sun Aug 19 11:58:47 2018 (r52158) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Sun Aug 19 12:09:31 2018 (r52159) @@ -77,37 +77,41 @@ <itemizedlist> <listitem> - <para>Virtual Machine images, to download and - import on a virtual environment of choice. - These can be downloaded from the - <link xlink:href="https://www.freebsd.org/where.html">Download FreeBSD</link> - page. There are images for KVM (<quote>qcow2</quote>), - VMWare (<quote>vmdk</quote>), Hyper-V (<quote>vhd</quote>), - and raw device images that are universally supported. - These are not installation images, but rather the - preconfigured (<quote>already installed</quote>) instances, - ready to run and perform post-installation tasks.</para> + <para>Virtual Machine images, to download and import on a + virtual environment of choice. These can be downloaded from + the <link + xlink:href="https://www.freebsd.org/where.html">Download + FreeBSD</link> page. There are images for KVM + (<quote>qcow2</quote>), VMWare (<quote>vmdk</quote>), + Hyper-V (<quote>vhd</quote>), and raw device images that are + universally supported. These are not installation images, + but rather the preconfigured (<quote>already + installed</quote>) instances, ready to run and perform + post-installation tasks.</para> </listitem> <listitem> - <para>Virtual Machine images available at Amazon's - <link xlink:href="https://aws.amazon.com/mp/solutions/freebsd/">AWS Marketplace</link>, - <link xlink:href="https://azuremarketplace.microsoft.com/en-us/marketplace/apps?search=freebsd&page=1">Microsoft Azure Marketplace</link>, - and <link xlink:href="https://console.cloud.google.com/launcher/details/freebsd-cloud/freebsd-11">Google Cloud Platform</link>, - to run on their respective hosting services. - For more information on deploying &os; - on Azure please consult the relevant chapter in the - <link xlink:href="https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/azure/virtual-machines/linux/freebsd-intro-on-azure">Azure Documentation</link>.</para> + <para>Virtual Machine images available at Amazon's <link + xlink:href="https://aws.amazon.com/mp/solutions/freebsd/">AWS + Marketplace</link>, <link + xlink:href="https://azuremarketplace.microsoft.com/en-us/marketplace/apps?search=freebsd&page=1">Microsoft + Azure Marketplace</link>, and <link + xlink:href="https://console.cloud.google.com/launcher/details/freebsd-cloud/freebsd-11">Google + Cloud Platform</link>, to run on their respective hosting + services. For more information on deploying &os; on Azure + please consult the relevant chapter in the <link + xlink:href="https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/azure/virtual-machines/linux/freebsd-intro-on-azure">Azure + Documentation</link>.</para> </listitem> <listitem> - <para>SD card images, for embedded systems such - as Raspberry Pi or BeagleBone Black. These can be - downloaded from the - <link xlink:href="https://www.freebsd.org/where.html">Download FreeBSD</link> - page. These files must be uncompressed and written - as a raw image to an SD card, from which the board will - then boot.</para> + <para>SD card images, for embedded systems such as Raspberry + Pi or BeagleBone Black. These can be downloaded from the + <link + xlink:href="https://www.freebsd.org/where.html">Download + FreeBSD</link> page. These files must be uncompressed and + written as a raw image to an SD card, from which the board + will then boot.</para> </listitem> <listitem> @@ -532,7 +536,7 @@ <acronym>USB</acronym> stick using the instructions below.</para> </listitem> - + <listitem> <para><literal>-mini-memstick.img</literal>: Like <literal>-bootonly.iso</literal>, does not include @@ -1255,8 +1259,8 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID: 830b92d4.</s <para>The <filename>/usr</filename> partition holds many of the files which support the system, including the &os; Ports - Collection and system source code. At least 2 gigabytes of space is - recommended for this partition.</para> + Collection and system source code. At least 2 gigabytes of + space is recommended for this partition.</para> <para>When selecting partition sizes, keep the space requirements in mind. Running out of space in one partition Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml Sun Aug 19 11:58:47 2018 (r52158) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml Sun Aug 19 12:09:31 2018 (r52159) @@ -973,8 +973,8 @@ lo0: flags=8049<UP,LOOPBACK,RUNNING,MULTICAST> m <programlisting>ifconfig_dc0="DHCP"</programlisting> - <para>Replace <replaceable>dc0</replaceable> with the correct value - for the system.</para> + <para>Replace <replaceable>dc0</replaceable> with the correct + value for the system.</para> <para>The line added, then, follow the instructions given in <xref linkend="config-network-testing"/>.</para> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/eresources/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/eresources/chapter.xml Sun Aug 19 11:58:47 2018 (r52158) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/eresources/chapter.xml Sun Aug 19 12:09:31 2018 (r52159) @@ -282,12 +282,14 @@ <row> <entry>&a.dev-ci.name;</entry> - <entry>Build and test reports from the Continuous Integration servers</entry> + <entry>Build and test reports from the Continuous + Integration servers</entry> </row> <row> <entry>&a.dev-reviews.name;</entry> - <entry>Notifications of the FreeBSD review system</entry> + <entry>Notifications of the FreeBSD review + system</entry> </row> <row> @@ -394,10 +396,11 @@ <entry>General technical discussion</entry> </row> - <row> + <row> <entry>&a.haskell.name;</entry> - <entry>&os;-specific Haskell issues and discussions</entry> - </row> + <entry>&os;-specific Haskell issues and + discussions</entry> + </row> <row> <entry>&a.hardware.name;</entry> @@ -1259,18 +1262,22 @@ <varlistentry> <term>&a.dev-ci.name;</term> <listitem> - <para><emphasis>Continuous Integration reports of build and test results</emphasis></para> + <para><emphasis>Continuous Integration reports of build + and test results</emphasis></para> - <para>All Continuous Integration reports of build and test results</para> + <para>All Continuous Integration reports of build and test + results</para> </listitem> </varlistentry> <varlistentry> <term>&a.dev-reviews.name;</term> <listitem> - <para><emphasis>Notifications of work in progress in FreeBSD's review tool</emphasis></para> + <para><emphasis>Notifications of work in progress in + FreeBSD's review tool</emphasis></para> - <para>Automated notifications of work in progress for review in FreeBSD's review tools, including + <para>Automated notifications of work in progress for + review in FreeBSD's review tools, including patches.</para> </listitem> </varlistentry>
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