Date: Thu, 27 Jul 2000 13:50:05 -0700 (PDT) From: Udo Erdelhoff <ue@nathan.ruhr.de> To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/20209: [PATCH] Update of FAQ to 4.1 Message-ID: <200007272050.NAA21754@freefall.freebsd.org>
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The following reply was made to PR docs/20209; it has been noted by GNATS. From: Udo Erdelhoff <ue@nathan.ruhr.de> To: eogren@earthlink.net Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.ORG Subject: Re: docs/20209: [PATCH] Update of FAQ to 4.1 Date: Thu, 27 Jul 2000 20:18:39 +0200 On Thu, Jul 27, 2000 at 02:24:25AM -0400, eogren@earthlink.net wrote: Some comments: > Index: book.sgml > =================================================================== > RCS file: /usr/local/doctree/doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml,v > retrieving revision 1.80 > diff -u -r1.80 book.sgml > --- book.sgml 2000/07/25 18:24:48 1.80 > +++ book.sgml 2000/07/27 06:19:25 > @@ -154,9 +154,9 @@ > - URL="ftp://[...]/releases/i386/4.0-RELEASE/">4.0</ulink>; > + URL="ftp://[...]/releases/i386/4.1-RELEASE/">4.0</ulink>; ^^^ ^^^ You may want to use 1,$s/4\.0/4.1/g next time ;-) > @@ -300,23 +300,26 @@ > 3.0-RELEASE (Oct 1998) > | > | [3.0-STABLE] > - *BRANCH* 3.1-RELESE (Feb 1999) -> 3.2 -> 3.3 -> 3.4 -> ... future 3.x releases ... > + *BRANCH* 3.1-RELEASE (Feb 1999) -> 3.2 -> 3.3 -> 3.4 -> ... future 3.x releases ... > | (May 1999) (Sep 1999) (Dec 1999) You may want to add 3.5-RELEASE (June 2000) > - with the release of 2.2.8. 3.4-STABLE has now replaced it, > + with the release of 2.2.8. 3-STABLE replaced it, > with 3.4-RELEASE being released in mid-December 1999. "with 3.5-RELEASE having been released in June 2000" > @@ -408,9 +411,9 @@ > - <para>The current 4.X-STABLE release, 4.0-RELEASE can be > + <para>The current 4.X-STABLE release, 4.1-RELEASE can be I would prefer to use 4-STABLE instead of 4.X-STABLE. There's only one CVS Branch for the variouses 4.X-Releases. > found in the <ulink > - URL="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/releases/i386/4.0-RELEASE/">; the 4.0-RELEASE</ulink> directory.</para> > + URL="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/releases/i386/4.1-RELEASE/">; the 4.1-RELEASE</ulink> directory.</para> will result in "... found in the <the 4.1-RELEASE> directory." (link part denoted by <>) One of the two "the" can be removed and the word directory should be a part of the link, too. In other words, use found in <ulink URL="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/releases/i386/4.1-RELEASE/"the 4.1-RELEASE directory</ulink>.</para> and get "...found in <the 4.1-RELEASE directory>" > @@ -3877,7 +3880,7 @@ > </listitem> > </varlistentry> > > -<varlistentry><term>for 4.0-RELEASE/4.X-STABLE</term> > +<varlistentry><term>for 4.1-RELEASE/4.X-STABLE</term> Again, I'd prefer to use 4-STABLE instead of 4.X-STABLE. /s/Udo -- "I say we take off and nuke the site from orbit - it's the only way to be sure." (Aliens II) To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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