Date: Sat, 04 Aug 2001 00:42:42 +0100 From: John Murphy <jfm@blueyonder.co.uk> To: Nik Clayton <nik@freebsd.org> Cc: doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Handbook status Message-ID: <sd9mmts31clv26bm9ob9m1pph3pkq5jmda@4ax.com> In-Reply-To: <20010801050540.C10537@canyon.nothing-going-on.org> References: <20010801050540.C10537@canyon.nothing-going-on.org>
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Nik Clayton <nik@freebsd.org> wrote: >Folks, > >Information about the current state of the Handbook prior to the >printing the Handbook has been added as a project to: > > http://www.freebsd.org/docproj/current.html#handbook > >and the task list can be seen at=20 > > http://www.freebsd.org/docproj/handbook.html > >Please note that the "Responsible" column is more a guideline than a >hard and fast rule -- should any like to work on any of these, please >contact the "Responsible" person for more details. I'd really like to help, particularly with the currently unassigned "Review the rest of the book for grammatical errors". However: I'm still very much a newbie and I think that by the time I learn how to use CVS to get the .sgml files and then how to pr the diffs, the deadline would have passed. Does it help if I draw attention to errors by chapter? Eg: Paragraph above 7.3.2 Where device is the device that you boot from, such as ad0 for the first IDE disk, ad4 for the first IDE disk on a second IDE 2 and Example 7-2. boot2 screenshot >> FreeBSD/i386 BOOT Default: 0:wd(0,a)/kernel a (for consistency) Also, in paragraph 6 of Chapter 7.2 "in to" is used instead of "into" which seems unusual. Is this a preferred internationalism? Please help me to help. John. To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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