Date: Thu, 18 May 2017 17:03:05 +0000 From: Glen Barber <gjb@FreeBSD.org> To: Adam Weinberger <adamw@adamw.org> Cc: src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable-11@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r318468 - in stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1: hardware readme Message-ID: <20170518170305.GC49693@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <83CC5C29-230F-4033-B2A6-90E81D403A79@adamw.org> References: <201705181624.v4IGOBPb013236@repo.freebsd.org> <83CC5C29-230F-4033-B2A6-90E81D403A79@adamw.org>
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--vOmOzSkFvhd7u8Ms Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Thu, May 18, 2017 at 10:43:28AM -0600, Adam Weinberger wrote: > > On 18 May, 2017, at 10:24, Glen Barber <gjb@FreeBSD.org> wrote: > >=20 > > Author: gjb > > Date: Thu May 18 16:24:11 2017 > > New Revision: 318468 > > URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/318468 > >=20 > > Log: > > Fix grammar nits. > >=20 > > Sponsored by: The FreeBSD Foundation > >=20 > > Modified: > > stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml > > stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml > >=20 > > Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml > > =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D > > --- stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml Thu May = 18 16:24:10 2017 (r318467) > > +++ stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml Thu May = 18 16:24:11 2017 (r318468) > > @@ -555,7 +555,7 @@ > > </itemizedlist> > >=20 > > <para>The following Sun &ultrasparc; systems are not tested but > > - believed to be also supported by &os;:</para> > > + believed to also be supported by &os;:</para> >=20 > As long as we're picking grammar nits, you've split an infinitive there. = I think you want "believed also to be supported" or "believed to be support= ed by &os; as well:". >=20 I like the wording from your second suggestion better anyway. Thanks. Glen --vOmOzSkFvhd7u8Ms Content-Type: application/pgp-signature; name="signature.asc" -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- iQIzBAEBCAAdFiEEjRJAPC5sqwhs9k2jAxRYpUeP4pMFAlkd08QACgkQAxRYpUeP 4pO1kQ/9GRlSHIL0Jn0RAr7AMCFyhEqII9rfTfTErW1ltDrVGLcVWiF83eiCT5SE zrGq6kyWL6abKQKIhFJ0+i27s6IwXBgZ7I3dVB1djrhdLEr5Tlhh3mHxT8BbvApQ 9aZWufOzISL+dLnwZl3MW0raOC0mSXhm8FLECWNZgBxh1CxjYu0A0PsL7nrXgE9b PNY927CvbdcASgmZEqxb6Nk7CDCMlTwTNDuzyDKwMB4pvxBgNtmHY8qPT6VeVAid vqmpsW9iP1meKcDC4wI4meWBnfOK6DwKNY3mrIeoTbQXCWc59V5j55Zsd/OX2TYn D3F/7oxOQ0LTWhfHSht1kAb3voqp+nrw6yGJHJK/okCOEae6Odlv6tF/VqmtPUMU G8LOetd7QZXHn4GzaEna+eFutw86jn9/dlnJSqhrpjLRRCOQ9A8j3YwpoIBrqVcq b21RkEtAzJ0u82Z0G2VohV6gFIV4cwPk2MaqafbHX2hXXtzf6j1+T0uiXc+aVJlC zJsD8KhcQ1uplD1bmo956bVG/NjQijC+7+ZSPLuNJ/remRRa7LPRwzNrPQmY4VEJ ZoCQ+DQEOw2bvpB7CbX6rq6GtcHhVXU/7SU2VtL/t6gEFC0PVUprI2Pko5r/o90r IC29pDT/CdYdoc8ApTjJmawIlfbeMw3dIpUVAu6AU6bhZfYkSp0= =j28E -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --vOmOzSkFvhd7u8Ms--
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