Date: Wed, 17 Aug 2011 10:58:54 +0200 From: Marius Strobl <marius@alchemy.franken.de> To: "Andrey V. Elsukov" <ae@FreeBSD.org> Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org, Marcel Moolenaar <marcel@FreeBSD.org>, Pawel Jakub Dawidek <pjd@FreeBSD.org> Subject: Re: RFC: BOOTSTRAPPING section to the gpart(8) Message-ID: <20110817085854.GI48988@alchemy.franken.de> In-Reply-To: <4E4B7410.1020208@FreeBSD.org> References: <4E4B73C0.9040502@FreeBSD.org> <4E4B7410.1020208@FreeBSD.org>
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On Wed, Aug 17, 2011 at 11:56:00AM +0400, Andrey V. Elsukov wrote: > On 17.08.2011 11:54, Andrey V. Elsukov wrote: > > Hi All, > > > > i've prepared the patch to the gpart(8) manual page. > > It adds new section that describes bootcode images we have and > > how to use them. > > Sorry, forgot the patch :) Could you please first run the changed man page through a spell checker and change the formatting so each sentence starts on a new line? Please also don't use more than something like 78 columns per line. It then should be easier to discuss the changes in content. > +the specific partition. Not The embedding bootstrap code should be done only with That probably should read "Note that embedding bootstrap code". > +option. The GEOM PART class has knowleage on how to embed bootstrap code into That probably should be "knowledge". Marius
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