Date: Tue, 11 Dec 2018 22:08:20 +0000 (UTC) From: Guangyuan Yang <ygy@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r52673 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/12.0R Message-ID: <201812112208.wBBM8KoG049281@repo.freebsd.org>
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Author: ygy Date: Tue Dec 11 22:08:19 2018 New Revision: 52673 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/52673 Log: Fix some typos in 12.0R announcement. PR: 233943 Reported by: Max Stucchi <max@stucchi.ch> Approved by: gjb Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/12.0R/announce.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/12.0R/announce.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/12.0R/announce.xml Tue Dec 11 20:51:57 2018 (r52672) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/12.0R/announce.xml Tue Dec 11 22:08:19 2018 (r52673) @@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ emulation.</p> </li> <li> - <p>The bhyve(8) utility is now able to be run withing + <p>The bhyve(8) utility is now able to be run within a jail(8).</p> </li> <li> @@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ booting into a "livefs" based rescue mode. This should be all you need if you can burn and use DVD-sized media.</p> - <p>Additionally, this can be written to an USB memory stick + <p>Additionally, this can be written to a USB memory stick (flash drive) for the &arch.amd64; architecture and used to do an install on machines capable of booting off USB drives. It also supports booting into a "livefs" based rescue @@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ supports booting into a "livefs" based rescue mode. There are no pre-built packages.</p> - <p>Additionally, this can be written to an USB memory stick + <p>Additionally, this can be written to a USB memory stick (flash drive) for the &arch.amd64; architecture and used to do an install on machines capable of booting off USB drives. It also supports booting into a "livefs" based rescue mode. @@ -220,7 +220,7 @@ perform a network based install (e.g., from an HTTP or FTP server) after booting from the CD.</p> - <p>Additionally, this can be written to an USB memory stick + <p>Additionally, this can be written to a USB memory stick (flash drive) for the &arch.amd64; architecture and used to do an install on machines capable of booting off USB drives. It also supports booting into a "livefs" based rescue mode. @@ -241,7 +241,7 @@ <dt>memstick</dt> <dd> - <p>This can be written to an USB memory stick (flash drive) + <p>This can be written to a USB memory stick (flash drive) and used to do an install on machines capable of booting off USB drives. It also supports booting into a "livefs" based rescue mode. There are no pre-built packages.</p> @@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ <dt>mini-memstick</dt> <dd> - <p>This can be written to an USB memory stick (flash drive) + <p>This can be written to a USB memory stick (flash drive) and used to boot a machine, but does not contain the installation distribution sets on the medium itself, similar to the bootonly image. It also supports booting into
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