Date: Tue, 6 Nov 2007 14:02:42 GMT From: Gabor Kovesdan <gabor@FreeBSD.org> To: Perforce Change Reviews <perforce@freebsd.org> Subject: PERFORCE change 128740 for review Message-ID: <200711061402.lA6E2gul079178@repoman.freebsd.org>
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http://perforce.freebsd.org/chv.cgi?CH=128740 Change 128740 by gabor@gabor_server on 2007/11/06 14:02:28 IFC Affected files ... .. //depot/projects/docproj_hu/books/handbook/geom/chapter.sgml#3 integrate .. //depot/projects/docproj_hu/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml#2 integrate .. //depot/projects/docproj_hu/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml#3 integrate .. //depot/projects/docproj_hu/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.sgml#2 integrate .. //depot/projects/docproj_hu/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml#3 integrate Differences ... ==== //depot/projects/docproj_hu/books/handbook/geom/chapter.sgml#3 (text+ko) ==== @@ -619,7 +619,6 @@ </sect2> </sect1> -<!-- <sect1 id="geom-gjournal"> <title>Naplózó UFS GEOM-on keresztül</title> @@ -713,7 +712,6 @@ helytelen használata által okozott sérülésektõl.</para> </sect1> ---> </chapter> <!-- ==== //depot/projects/docproj_hu/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml#2 (text+ko) ==== @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ <!-- The FreeBSD Documentation Project - $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml,v 1.382 2007/08/31 16:12:12 blackend Exp $ + $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml,v 1.384 2007/11/02 15:48:54 keramida Exp $ --> <chapter id="install"> @@ -1147,7 +1147,7 @@ orm0: <Option ROM> at iomem 0xc0000-0xc7fff on isa0 fdc0: <NEC 72065B or clone> at port 0x3f0-0x3f5,0x3f7 irq 6 drq2 on isa0 fdc0: FIFO enabled, 8 bytes threshold -fd0: <1440-KB 3.5" drive> on fdc0 drive 0 +fd0: <1440-KB 3.5” drive> on fdc0 drive 0 atkbdc0: <Keyboard controller (i8042)> at port 0x60,0x64 on isa0 atkbd0: <AT Keyboard> flags 0x1 irq1 on atkbdc0 kbd0 at atkbd0 @@ -4093,7 +4093,7 @@ <guimenuitem>System Tools</guimenuitem> menu.</para> <para>&os; can support &ms-dos; based file systems (FAT16 and FAT32). - This requires you use the &man.mount.msdosfs.8; command + This requires you use the &man.mount.8; command with the required parameters. The utility most common usage is:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>mount -t msdosfs /dev/ad0s1 /mnt</userinput></screen> @@ -4123,19 +4123,19 @@ <question> <para>My system hangs while probing hardware during boot, or it behaves strangely during install, or the floppy - drive isn't probed.</para> + drive is not probed.</para> </question> <answer> <para>&os; 5.0 and above makes extensive use of the system ACPI service on the i386, amd64 and ia64 platforms to - aid in system configuration if it's detected during + aid in system configuration if it is detected during boot. Unfortunately, some bugs still exist in both the ACPI driver and within system motherboards and BIOS. The use of ACPI can be disabled by setting the <literal>hint.acpi.0.disabled</literal> hint in the third stage boot loader:</para> - <screen>set hint.acpi.0.disabled="1"</screen> + <screen><userinput>set hint.acpi.0.disabled="1"</userinput></screen> <para>This is reset each time the system is booted, so it is necessary to @@ -4204,7 +4204,7 @@ <para>To tell &os; that you want to boot from BIOS disk 2, which is the first SCSI disk in the system. If you only - had one IDE disk, you would use '1:' instead.</para> + had one IDE disk, you would use <literal>1:</literal> instead.</para> <para>Once you have determined the correct values to use, you can put the command exactly as you would have typed @@ -4219,17 +4219,17 @@ <para>I go to boot from the hard disk for the first time after installing &os;, but the Boot Manager prompt just prints <literal>F?</literal> at the boot menu each time - but the boot won't go any further.</para> + but the boot will not go any further.</para> </question> <answer> <para>The hard disk geometry was set incorrectly in the - Partition editor when you installed &os;. Go back into + partition editor when you installed &os;. Go back into the partition editor and specify the actual geometry of your hard disk. You must reinstall &os; again from the beginning with the correct geometry.</para> <para>If you are failing entirely in figuring out the - correct geometry for your machine, here's a tip: Install + correct geometry for your machine, here is a tip: Install a small DOS partition at the beginning of the disk and install &os; after that. The install program will see the DOS partition and try to infer the correct geometry @@ -4240,10 +4240,10 @@ <blockquote> <para>If you are setting up a truly dedicated &os; - server or workstation where you don't care for + server or workstation where you do not care for (future) compatibility with DOS, Linux or another - operating system, you've also got the option to use - the entire disk (`A' in the partition editor), + operating system, you also have got the option to use + the entire disk (<guimenuitem>A</guimenuitem> in the partition editor), selecting the non-standard option where &os; occupies the entire disk from the very first to the very last sector. This will leave all geometry considerations @@ -4262,7 +4262,7 @@ <para>Your card is probably on a different IRQ from what is specified in the <filename>/boot/device.hints</filename> file. The - ed driver does not use the `soft' configuration by + &man.ed.4; driver does not use the <quote>soft</quote> configuration by default (values entered using EZSETUP in DOS), but it will use the software configuration if you specify <literal>-1</literal> in the hints for the @@ -4271,7 +4271,7 @@ <para>Either move the jumper on the card to a hard configuration setting (altering the kernel settings if necessary), or specify the IRQ as <literal>-1</literal> - by setting the hint <quote>hint.ed.0.irq="-1"</quote> + by setting the hint <literal>hint.ed.0.irq="-1"</literal> This will tell the kernel to use the soft configuration.</para> ==== //depot/projects/docproj_hu/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml#3 (text+ko) ==== @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ <!-- The FreeBSD Documentation Project - $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml,v 1.120 2007/08/18 23:12:23 bmah Exp $ + $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml,v 1.121 2007/10/26 16:06:50 bmah Exp $ --> <!-- The FreeBSD Hungarian Documentation Project ==== //depot/projects/docproj_hu/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.sgml#2 (text+ko) ==== @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ <!-- The FreeBSD Documentation Project - $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.sgml,v 1.438 2007/07/07 16:20:58 chinsan Exp $ + $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.sgml,v 1.441 2007/11/02 15:47:21 keramida Exp $ --> <appendix id="mirrors"> @@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ Phone: <phone>+1 866 273-6255</phone> Fax: <fax>+1 217 453-9956</fax> Email: <email>sales@bsdmall.com</email> - WWW: <otheraddr><ulink url="http://www.bsdmall.com/freebsd1.html"></ulink></otheraddr>; + WWW: <otheraddr><ulink url="http://www.bsdmall.com/"></ulink></otheraddr>; </address> </listitem> @@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ <street>3623 Sanford Street</street> <city>Concord</city>, <state>CA</state> <postcode>94520-1405</postcode> <country>USA</country> - Phone: <phone>+1 925 674-0783</phone> + Phone: <phone>+1 925 240-6652</phone> Fax: <fax>+1 925 674-0821</fax> Email: <email>info@freebsdmall.com</email> WWW: <otheraddr><ulink url="http://www.freebsdmall.com/"></ulink></otheraddr>; @@ -416,7 +416,7 @@ might be interested in. Again, none of these are valid for the Ports Collection since the Ports Collection does not have multiple - revisions.</para> + branches of development.</para> <para>When you specify a branch tag, you normally receive the latest versions of the files on that line of development. If ==== //depot/projects/docproj_hu/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml#3 (text+ko) ==== @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ <!-- The FreeBSD Documentation Project - $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml,v 1.315 2007/10/03 20:35:35 danger Exp $ + $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml,v 1.316 2007/10/23 07:03:34 dougb Exp $ --> <chapter id="security"> @@ -4078,7 +4078,7 @@ <title>Advantages of Using OpenSSH</title> <para>Normally, when using &man.telnet.1; or &man.rlogin.1;, - data is sent over the network in an clear, un-encrypted form. + data is sent over the network in a clear, un-encrypted form. Network sniffers anywhere in between the client and server can steal your user/password information or data transferred in your session. <application>OpenSSH</application> offers a variety of authentication and
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