Date: Sat, 9 Mar 2002 08:50:02 -0800 (PST) From: Tom Rhodes <darklogik@pittgoth.com> To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/35683: [PATCH] Fix amd info Message-ID: <200203091650.g29Go2A89706@freefall.freebsd.org>
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The following reply was made to PR docs/35683; it has been noted by GNATS. From: Tom Rhodes <darklogik@pittgoth.com> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/35683: [PATCH] Fix amd info Date: Sat, 9 Mar 2002 11:43:56 -0500 (EST) I like your suggestion Udo, I killed the nitpick word "the" and did a little more than just that. This patch is a tad bit larger, and I would either like some comments or a commit. I did not like the use of the word "access" 3 times in one sentence. Here is a proposed rewording of that sentence, natd section. -- Tom Rhodes diff -ru handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml handbook.new/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml --- handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml Thu Mar 7 18:55:11 2002 +++ handbook.new/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml Sat Mar 9 11:37:19 2002 @@ -988,13 +988,13 @@ <indexterm><primary>automatic mounter daemon</primary></indexterm> <para>&man.amd.8; (the automatic mounter daemon) - is a useful daemon that automatically mounts a + automatically mounts a remote filesystem whenever a file or directory within that filesystem is accessed. Filesystems that are inactive for a period of time will also be automatically unmounted by <application>amd</application>. Using <application>amd</application> provides a simple alternative - to permanent mounts, as permanent mounts should be listed in the + to permanent mounts, as permanent mounts are usually listed in <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>.</para> <para><application>amd</application> operates by attaching @@ -4796,7 +4796,7 @@ <title>Setup</title> <para>Due to the diminishing IP space in IPv4, and the increased number of users on high-speed consumer lines such as cable or DSL, people are - in more and more need of an Internet Connection Sharing solution. The + more in need of an Internet Connection Sharing solution. The ability to connect several computers online through one connection and IP address makes &man.natd.8; a reasonable choice.</para> @@ -4831,9 +4831,9 @@ </textobject> </mediaobject> - <para>With this setup, the machine without Internet access can use - the machine with access as a gateway to access the outside - world.</para> + <para>With a setup such as this, a machine not connected to the + internet directly can still access the internet through + the <acronym>LAN</acronym>.</para> </sect2> <sect2 id="configuration"> To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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