Date: Fri, 25 Sep 2015 17:49:36 +0000 From: bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: [Bug 203345] Grammatical Error in Developer's handbook (Kernel debugging) Message-ID: <bug-203345-9@https.bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/>
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https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=203345 Bug ID: 203345 Summary: Grammatical Error in Developer's handbook (Kernel debugging) Product: Documentation Version: Latest Hardware: Any OS: Any Status: New Severity: Affects Some People Priority: --- Component: Documentation Assignee: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Reporter: munshs@rpi.edu Created attachment 161396 --> https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/attachment.cgi?id=161396&action=edit SVN difference file This section discusses the efforts made in correcting a minor grammatical error in the FreeBSD Developer's Handbook. This error was located on the "Kernel Debugging", Chapter 10, Section 1. https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en/books/developers-handbook/kerneldebug.html "Several types of kernel crash dumps are available: full memory dumps, which hold the complete contents of physical memory, minidumps, which hold only memory pages in use by the kernel (FreeBSD 6.2 and higher), and textdumps, which hold captured scripted or interactive debugger output (FreeBSD 7.1 and higher)." After the colon, the sentence should have read "full memory dumps, which hold the complete contents of physical memory; minidumps, which hold ...; and textdumps, which hold captured ..." While there were several little comma based errors in the handbook, this one was particularly confusing because it was fusing two list items together. -- You are receiving this mail because: You are the assignee for the bug.
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