Date: Wed, 25 Mar 1998 09:02:57 -0700 From: Sean Kelly <kelly@plutotech.com> To: nik@iii.co.uk Cc: doc@FreeBSD.ORG, jfieber@FreeBSD.ORG, mbarkah@FreeBSD.ORG, paul@FreeBSD.ORG, dave@FreeBSD.ORG Subject: Re: [REVIEW] Changes to the DocProj web pages Message-ID: <35192AB1.43F399D@plutotech.com> References: <19980325110053.21549@iii.co.uk>
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Nik: These new pages feel professional yet inviting. I like them. The only nits I have to pick are comprised of punctuation errors and typos: On the `docproj' page, the second paragraph uses "it's" when it should be "its". (The paragraph after that one gets it right.) On the `current' page, the third paragraph should read "whose" instead of "who's". On the `sgml' page, why is the emphasis for `not' in the fourth paragpraph rendered as ``*not*'' instead of using italics or bold? On the `submitting' page, change "how" in the third paragraph (``You should probably...'') to "who". Thanks for taking this on. --Sean To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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