Date: Thu, 14 Mar 2002 22:54:42 +0100 From: Udo Erdelhoff <ue@nathan.ruhr.de> To: "Bruce A. Mah" <bmah@freebsd.org> Cc: freebsd-sparc@freebsd.org, freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: FreeBSD/sparc64 install document active in -CURRENT Message-ID: <20020314215442.GR90154@nathan.ruhr.de> In-Reply-To: <200203142134.g2ELY8O23997@bmah.dyndns.org> References: <200203140543.g2E5hek56478@bmah.dyndns.org> <20020314185648.GO90154@nathan.ruhr.de> <200203142134.g2ELY8O23997@bmah.dyndns.org>
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Hi Bruce, On Thu, Mar 14, 2002 at 01:34:08PM -0800, Bruce A. Mah wrote: > Good job...I can't believe I left off so many closing tags (admittedly > I wasn't looking for them). Two minor things... looking for missing closing tags is a stupid task best left to a program. I have to admit that at least half of them are not only missing closing tags, but also missing opening tags as well. > Can we get "(systems with one CPU)" and "(SMP systems)" outside the > <screen></screen> element? They're explanatory text, not literal stuff > that shows up on the screen. Not sure if there's an easy way to do > this. Sure, I can always use callouts - the bullet images cannot be mistaken for 'real' screen output. > I went through a little bit of work to make sure all of the multi-word > replaceables had hyphens separating the words. "name of entry" should > probably be "name-of-entry" to be consistent with this. No problem there. /s/Udo -- "God, root, where's the difference?" (http://www.userfriendly.org) To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-sparc" in the body of the message
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