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Date:      Mon, 17 Jun 2013 21:17:51 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r41940 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style
Message-ID:  <201306172117.r5HLHphQ045621@svn.freebsd.org>

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Author: wblock
Date: Mon Jun 17 21:17:51 2013
New Revision: 41940
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41940

Log:
  Update ancient word list in FDP.
  
  Reviewed by:	dru

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml	Mon Jun 17 20:52:30 2013	(r41939)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml	Mon Jun 17 21:17:51 2013	(r41940)
@@ -457,89 +457,80 @@ GB.  Hardware compression &hellip;</lite
   <sect1 id="writing-style-word-list">
     <title>Word List</title>
 
-    <para>The following is a small list of words spelled the way they
-      should be used in the FreeBSD Documentation Project.  If the
-      word you are looking for is not in this list, then please
-      consult the <ulink
-	url="http://www.oreilly.com/oreilly/author/stylesheet.html">O'Reilly
-	word list</ulink>.</para>
-
-    <itemizedlist>
-      <listitem>
-	<para>2.2.X</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-	<para>4.X-STABLE</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-	<para>CD-ROM</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-	<para>DoS <emphasis>(Denial of Service)</emphasis> </para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-	<para>Ports Collection</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-	<para>IPsec</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-	<para>Internet</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-	<para>MHz</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-	<para>Soft Updates</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-	<para>Unix</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-	<para>disk label</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-	<para>email</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-	<para>file system</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-	<para>manual page</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-	<para>mail server</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-	<para>name server</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-	<para>null-modem</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-	<para>read-only</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-	<para>web server</para>
-      </listitem>
-    </itemizedlist>
+    <para>This list of words shows the correct spelling and
+      capitalization when used in FreeBSD Documentation.  If a word is
+      not on this list, ask about that word on the &a.doc;.</para>
+
+    <informaltable frame="none" pgwide="0">
+      <tgroup cols="2">
+	<thead>
+	  <row>
+	    <entry>Word</entry>
+	    <entry>XML Code</entry>
+	  </row>
+	</thead>
+
+	<tbody>
+	  <row>
+	    <entry>CD-ROM</entry>
+	    <entry><![CDATA[<acronym>CD-ROM</acronym>]]></entry>
+	  </row>
+
+	  <row>
+	    <entry>DoS (Denial of Service)</entry>
+	    <entry><![CDATA[<acronym>DoS</acronym>]]></entry>
+	  </row>
+
+	  <row>
+	    <entry>email</entry>
+	  </row>
+
+	  <row>
+	    <entry>file system</entry>
+	  </row>
+
+	  <row>
+	    <entry>IPsec</entry>
+	  </row>
+
+	  <row>
+	    <entry>Internet</entry>
+	  </row>
+
+	  <row>
+	    <entry>manual page</entry>
+	  </row>
+
+	  <row>
+	    <entry>mail server</entry>
+	  </row>
+
+	  <row>
+	    <entry>name server</entry>
+	  </row>
+
+	  <row>
+	    <entry>Ports Collection</entry>
+	  </row>
+
+	  <row>
+	    <entry>read-only</entry>
+	  </row>
+
+	  <row>
+	    <entry>Soft Updates</entry>
+	  </row>
+
+	  <row>
+	    <entry>&unix;</entry>
+	    <entry><![CDATA[&unix;]]></entry>
+	  </row>
+
+	  <row>
+	    <entry>web server</entry>
+	  </row>
+	</tbody>
+      </tgroup>
+    </informaltable>
   </sect1>
 </chapter>



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