Date: Fri, 10 Jan 2014 02:24:13 +0000 From: Suni Arora <best.topintmrkt@gmail.com> To: freebsd-questions@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: =?windows-1252?Q?Local_business_=96_Freebsd=2Eorg?= Message-ID: <bcaec517c7d8084dad04ef946c01@google.com>
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<freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org>; Fri, 10 Jan 2014 08:32:23 +0000 (UTC) Received: from oldred.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.6]) by oldred.freebsd.org (8.14.5/8.14.7) with ESMTP id s0A8WNXK065426 for <freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org>; Fri, 10 Jan 2014 08:32:23 GMT (envelope-from nobody@oldred.freebsd.org) Received: (from nobody@localhost) by oldred.freebsd.org (8.14.5/8.14.5/Submit) id s0A8WNId065419; Fri, 10 Jan 2014 08:32:23 GMT (envelope-from nobody) Message-Id: <201401100832.s0A8WNId065419@oldred.freebsd.org> Date: Fri, 10 Jan 2014 08:32:23 GMT From: Jack Force <jack1243star@gmail.com> To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: www-3.1 Subject: docs/185632: Handbook typo X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project <freebsd-doc.freebsd.org> List-Unsubscribe: <http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/options/freebsd-doc>, <mailto:freebsd-doc-request@freebsd.org?subject=unsubscribe> List-Archive: <http://lists.freebsd.org/pipermail/freebsd-doc/>; List-Post: <mailto:freebsd-doc@freebsd.org> List-Help: <mailto:freebsd-doc-request@freebsd.org?subject=help> List-Subscribe: <http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/freebsd-doc>, <mailto:freebsd-doc-request@freebsd.org?subject=subscribe> X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 10 Jan 2014 08:40:01 -0000 >Number: 185632 >Category: docs >Synopsis: Handbook typo >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Fri Jan 10 08:40:00 UTC 2014 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Jack Force >Release: >Organization: >Environment: >Description: There is a typo in the Handbook. Section 27.6.1. "Basic Configuration", first paragraph: "If order to have..." => "In order to have..." The following paragraph also starts with "In order to..." which is overly verbose. >How-To-Repeat: Navigate to the following URL: http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en/books/handbook/mail-advanced.html >Fix: The diff file attached makes the sentence more clear and concise. Patch attached with submission follows: Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml =================================================================== --- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml (revision 43462) +++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml (working copy) @@ -1028,10 +1028,9 @@ <para>Out of the box, one can send email to external hosts as long as <filename>/etc/resolv.conf</filename> is configured or - the network has access to a configured - <acronym>DNS</acronym> server. If order to have mail - delivered to the <acronym>MTA</acronym> on the &os; host, - do one of the following:</para> + the network has access to a configured <acronym>DNS</acronym> + server. To have mail delivered to the <acronym>MTA</acronym> + on the &os; host, do one of the following:</para> <itemizedlist> <listitem> >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted:
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