Date: Sun, 13 Jan 2013 12:08:00 +0100 From: Marc Fonvieille <blackend@freebsd.org> To: Dru Lavigne <dru.lavigne@att.net> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: [patch] content changes to X11 chapter Message-ID: <20130113110800.GA1505@emphyrio.blackend.org> In-Reply-To: <1357943512.96753.YahooMailClassic@web184906.mail.gq1.yahoo.com> References: <1357943512.96753.YahooMailClassic@web184906.mail.gq1.yahoo.com>
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On Fri, Jan 11, 2013 at 02:31:52PM -0800, Dru Lavigne wrote: > Attached is the svn diff for the X11 chapter. This represents a > complete content update of this chapter. > > Igor is mostly happy. I think the remaining indent errors are false > warnings as they only occur when an inline tag is in the previous > <para>. > > I did not verify the widescreen settings. I think the i810 section is > correct. The KDM section needs more content. Other than that, it is a > decent first pass at bringing this chapter into the 21st century. > Some thoughts: - the whole diff will be difficult to read for a translator: section moves, whitespace & content changes, etc. It will be important to commit in separate parts: for example: 1st section moves/removals, 2nd addition & content changes and 3rd whitespace/indentation changes; - you removed the prerequisite of knowing how to use ports, I think it's important to know how to get a ports tree before using the ports; - you removed the way to get a localized keyboard for people not using a desktop manager. Well this configuration is not easy to guess for a newcomer. Maybe it can be kept somewhere in the chapter. - What is # in Crtl+Alt+F#? -- Marc
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