Date: Sat, 11 Dec 2010 22:13:21 +0900 (JST) From: Ryusuke SUZUKI <ryusuke@FreeBSD.org> To: glen.j.barber@gmail.com Cc: ryusuke@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: newbies page (ppp) Message-ID: <20101211.221321.193765267.ryusuke@jp.FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <4D026019.20408@gmail.com> References: <4D00E2C8.8020206@gmail.com> <20101211.011833.193776160.ryusuke@jp.FreeBSD.org> <4D026019.20408@gmail.com>
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----Security_Multipart(Sat_Dec_11_22_13_21_2010_819)-- Content-Type: Text/Plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit ryusuke> diff -u -r1.58 newbies.sgml ryusuke> --- newbies.sgml 9 Aug 2009 12:58:45 -0000 1.58 ryusuke> +++ newbies.sgml 9 Dec 2010 15:29:53 -0000 ryusuke> @@ -70,11 +70,10 @@ ryusuke> beginners. You do not have to know much about anything to enjoy ryusuke> this one.</p></li> ryusuke> ryusuke> - <li><p>The first thing many people need to set up is ppp, and there is ryusuke> - a lot of documentation to help. You might start with at least those ryusuke> - parts of the ryusuke> - <a href="&url.books;/handbook/index.html">Handbook</a> ryusuke> - that are relevant to your needs, and explore the ryusuke> + <li><p>There is a lot of documentation to help for setting up ppp. ryusuke> + You might start with the <a ryusuke> + href="&url.books;/handbook/ppp-and-slip.html">PPP and SLIP</a> ryusuke> + chapter of the FreeBSD Handbook that are relevant to your needs, and explore the gjb> Not to sound pedantic, but maybe 's/FreeBSD/&os;/' too? :) Thanks. I committed my patch with 's/FreeBSD/&os;/'; I also replaced other "FreeBSD" with "&os;". Regards, Ryusuke ----Security_Multipart(Sat_Dec_11_22_13_21_2010_819)-- Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.9 (FreeBSD) iEYEABECAAYFAk0DePEACgkQG5rRvmPSlySYEwCgvJiIAwpKldOvrC4a4/xRFKHD s3gAoOstfK9XUb7czpV2I7ukvbPq5I9u =7nMV -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- ----Security_Multipart(Sat_Dec_11_22_13_21_2010_819)----
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