Date: Mon, 14 Jan 2008 16:02:32 -0700 (MST) From: Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com> To: gregoryd.freebsd@free.fr Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org, keramida@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/119463: [handbook] [patch] typo in printing/chapter.sgml Message-ID: <20080114155723.K26271@wonkity.com> In-Reply-To: <1200344044.478bcbecb1228@imp.free.fr> References: <200801141342.m0EDgjCB069055@freefall.freebsd.org> <1200344044.478bcbecb1228@imp.free.fr>
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On Mon, 14 Jan 2008, gregoryd.freebsd@free.fr wrote: > Quoting keramida@FreeBSD.org: > > >> - <para>You should also specify the <literal>rw</literal> capability; >> - that tells <application>LPD</application> to open the printer in >> - read-write mode.</para> >> + <para>You should also specify the <literal>rw</literal> capability. >> + When this capability is present, <application>LPD</application> >> + opens the printer in read-write mode.</para> >> >> Does this look better? > > I guess we should avoid the repetition of "capability", though (the fdp-primer, > "writing style" invites us to). > What do you think of something like: " When present, it tells LPD to open the > printer in r/w mode". > My, I'm starting to feel like a fussy guy, now... :-\ <para>You should also include the <literal>rw</literal> capability so <application>LPD</application> opens the printer in read-write mode. -Warren Block * Rapid City, South Dakota USA
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