Date: Tue, 26 Nov 2013 21:06:44 +0200 From: Taras Korenko <ds@ukrhub.net> To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: en/handbook/users: proposed corrections Message-ID: <20131126190644.GC25578@gamma.ukrhub.net>
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Good day, doc@ folks.
I'd like to introduce some corrections to handbook/users chapter. Howeve=
r,
there might be moot points, so any comments will be appreciated.
Thanks.
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WBR, Taras Korenko
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--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.xml (revision 43253)
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.xml (working copy)
@@ -78,8 +78,8 @@
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<listitem>
<para>The user name is typed at the <prompt>login:</prompt>
- prompt. User names must be unique on the system as no two
- users can have the same user name. There are a number of
+ prompt. User names must be unique on the system.=20
+ There are a number of
rules for creating valid user names, documented in
&man.passwd.5;. Typically user names consist of eight or
fewer all lower case characters in order to maintain
@@ -91,9 +91,8 @@
<term>Password</term>
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<listitem>
- <para>Each account has an associated password. While the
- password can be blank, this is highly discouraged and
- every account should have a password.</para>
+ <para>Each account has an associated password. The password can be
+ blank, however this is highly discouraged.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
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@@ -149,7 +148,7 @@
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<listitem>
<para>By default &os; does not force users to change their
- passwords periodically. Password expiration can be
+ passwords. Password expiration can be
enforced on a per-user basis, forcing some or all users to
change their passwords after a certain amount of time has
elapsed.</para>
@@ -377,7 +376,7 @@
<primary><filename>/usr/share/skel</filename></primary>
</indexterm>
<indexterm><primary>skeleton directory</primary></indexterm>
- <para>&man.adduser.8; is a simple program for adding new users
+ <para>&man.adduser.8; is a simple program for adding new users.
When a new user is added, this program automatically updates
<filename>/etc/passwd</filename> and
<filename>/etc/group</filename>. It also creates a home
@@ -527,7 +526,7 @@
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<para>When passed no options, aside from an optional username,
&man.chpass.1; displays an editor containing user information.
- When the user exists from the editor, the user database is
+ When the user exits from the editor, the user database is
updated with the new information.</para>
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<note>
@@ -773,8 +772,7 @@
this limit too small may hinder a user's productivity as
it is often useful to be logged in multiple times or to
execute pipelines. Some tasks, such as compiling a large
- program, spawn multiple processes and other intermediate
- preprocessors.</para>
+ program, spawn lots of processes.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
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@@ -818,7 +816,7 @@
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<listitem>
<para>The limit on the amount of network memory, and
- thus mbufs<indexterm><primary>sbsize</primary></indexterm><indexterm>=
<primary>limiting users</primary><secondary>sbsize</secondary></indexterm>,=
a user may consume in order to limit network
+ thus mbufs<indexterm><primary>sbsize</primary></indexterm><indexterm>=
<primary>limiting users</primary><secondary>sbsize</secondary></indexterm>,=
a user may consume. This can be generally used to limit network
communications.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -960,7 +958,7 @@
<para>In this example, the argument to <option>-m</option> is a
comma-delimited list of users who are to be added to the group.
Unlike the previous example, these users are appended to the
- group list and do not replace the list of existing users in the
+ group and do not replace the list of existing users in the
group.</para>
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