Date: Sat, 27 Aug 2005 18:11:57 +0200 (CEST) From: Julien Gabel <jpeg@thilelli.net> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/85353: Very little cosmetic/ponctuation changes for the GEOM (geom-striping) chapter of the Handbook. Message-ID: <20050827161157.0DA1D73027@titeuf.thilelli.net> Resent-Message-ID: <200508271620.j7RGKGes086346@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 85353 >Category: docs >Synopsis: Very little cosmetic/ponctuation changes for the GEOM (geom-striping) chapter of the Handbook. >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sat Aug 27 16:20:16 GMT 2005 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Julien Gabel >Release: FreeBSD 5.4-STABLE i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD titeuf.thilelli.net 5.4-STABLE FreeBSD 5.4-STABLE #0: Sun Aug 21 14:49:33 CEST 2005 root@titeuf.thilelli.net:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/TITEUF i386 >Description: When command(s) follow a sentence, i think the sentence may end with a ':', as found in other part of the book (geom-mirror for example). An other point is when a kernel module is loaded, the .ko extension may be forgotten. We can see this in other documentation and the kldload(8) manual page. >How-To-Repeat: Compare with the corresponding chapter: http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom-striping.html >Fix: Here is a little patch: --- chapter.sgml.diff begins here --- --- /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.sgml Sat Aug 13 03:11:37 2005 +++ /tmp/chapter.sgml Sat Aug 27 17:53:32 2005 @@ -148,13 +148,13 @@ <step><para>Load the <filename>geom_stripe</filename> module:</para> - <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>kldload geom_stripe.ko</userinput></screen> + <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>kldload geom_stripe</userinput></screen> </step> <step><para>Ensure that a suitable mount point exists. If this volume will become a root partition, then temporarily use another mount point such as <filename - role="directory">/mnt</filename>.</para> + role="directory">/mnt</filename>:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>mkdir /mnt</userinput></screen> </step> @@ -164,7 +164,7 @@ the following command could be used to stripe two unused, unpartitioned <acronym>ATA</acronym> disks: <filename>/dev/ad2</filename> and - <filename>/dev/ad3</filename>.</para> + <filename>/dev/ad3</filename>:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>gstripe label -v st0 /dev/ad2 /dev/ad3</userinput></screen> @@ -201,12 +201,12 @@ <para>Many numbers will glide across the screen, and after a few seconds, the process will be complete. The volume has been - created and is ready to be mounted:</para> + created and is ready to be mounted.</para> </step> </procedure> <para>The following command can be used to manually mount a newly - created disk stripe.</para> + created disk stripe:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>mount /dev/stripe/st0a /mnt</userinput></screen> @@ -219,7 +219,7 @@ <para>The geom module must also be automatically loaded during system initialization, by adding a line to - <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename>.</para> + <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename>:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>echo 'geom_stripe_load="YES"' >> /boot/loader.conf</userinput></screen> @@ -392,7 +392,7 @@ system to a &man.loader.8; prompt. Load the kernel module manually:</para> - <screen>OK? <userinput>load geom_mirror.ko</userinput> + <screen>OK? <userinput>load geom_mirror</userinput> OK? <userinput>boot</userinput></screen> <para>If this works then for whatever reason the module was not --- chapter.sgml.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted:
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