Date: Tue, 19 Feb 2013 17:11:56 -0500 From: Glen Barber <gjb@FreeBSD.org> To: Eitan Adler <eadler@freebsd.org> Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r40980 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing Message-ID: <20130219221156.GD1514@glenbarber.us> In-Reply-To: <CAF6rxgmB-ZyfaZOJcP_sCX8zX_OopbJ=WXb1Cuj-rnt7W7yx7A@mail.gmail.com> References: <201302161543.r1GFh9Ek038848@svn.freebsd.org> <20130219215627.GB92116@felucia.tataz.chchile.org> <20130219220417.GC1514@glenbarber.us> <CAF6rxgmB-ZyfaZOJcP_sCX8zX_OopbJ=WXb1Cuj-rnt7W7yx7A@mail.gmail.com>
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--J5MfuwkIyy7RmF4Q Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Tue, Feb 19, 2013 at 05:06:18PM -0500, Eitan Adler wrote: > On 19 February 2013 17:04, Glen Barber <gjb@freebsd.org> wrote: > > On Tue, Feb 19, 2013 at 10:56:27PM +0100, Jeremie Le Hen wrote: > >> Hi Eitan, > >> > >> On Sat, Feb 16, 2013 at 03:43:09PM +0000, Eitan Adler wrote: > >> > Author: eadler > >> > Date: Sat Feb 16 15:43:08 2013 > >> > New Revision: 40980 > >> > URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40980 > >> > > >> > Log: > >> > Twiddle with the poorly worded sentence. > >> > >> I am not a native English speaker, so correct me if I'm wrong. The > >> commit log sounds slightly derogatory toward the original author. Giv= en > >> we have many committers who are not native speakers, maybe we should > >> avoid such comments so may dishearten them. > >> > >> Again, excuse me if I am misunderstanding your statement. > >> > > > > I agree, unintentional or otherwise, the log for this commit was a bit > > much, and certainly can be misinterpreted negatively. >=20 > I did not intend to offend anyone and if I did, I apologize. >=20 > Perhaps any of the following? >=20 > "Twiddle with a poorly worded sentence." > "Make this sentence more clear" > or > "Avoid references to the first person and clarify sentence." >=20 Either 2 or 3. Glen --J5MfuwkIyy7RmF4Q Content-Type: application/pgp-signature -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v2.0.19 (FreeBSD) iQEcBAEBCAAGBQJRI/isAAoJEFJPDDeguUajRBEIALbjrGF/CIqsMcN/5iKAuTc8 xNyi2GpB+OycTpp3BjmE9+81vUmH/ORpY88zu69lTB2/QfaKvu/QCYF1CI1SL5ol brqOsYAN1EXTwcEGEN+s8vy2Ij3Oij5W63INsGX8mRSXpWoKVnn/SchTKKEIf1CW 6ad05HcJtvqarACzWFJ9hxt4ZBffL96+z9HmEzFnx+4Ge0r/5TYikV39F72aOKFY +ZqzbIuH5f3a6lc/rlPx8VxvARslfbpQhN+czO9/YoACnBe/XHaV/UEUPWdQXJDX K7kAQlXkOzSYR8kOy26xiWWlXd89ZPQkGRqITGm5M1Q+hF4AFC5rPI0iaMKMZ0c= =NW6Z -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --J5MfuwkIyy7RmF4Q--
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