Date: Tue, 19 Feb 2013 23:16:52 +0100 From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org> To: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU> Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r41010 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors Message-ID: <20130219221651.GB15736@saturn> In-Reply-To: <alpine.GSO.1.10.1302181557570.9389@multics.mit.edu> References: <201302181954.r1IJsLmd095109@svn.freebsd.org> <alpine.GSO.1.10.1302181557570.9389@multics.mit.edu>
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On 2013-02-18 16:01, Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU> wrote: > On Mon, 18 Feb 2013, Eitan Adler wrote: > >Author: eadler > >Date: Mon Feb 18 19:54:21 2013 > >New Revision: 41010 > >URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41010 > > > >Log: > > While cvsup is deprecated, as long as it is documented and working, > > don't document bogus, ancient, or useless parts. > > > > Approved by: bcr (mentor) > > > >Modified: > > head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml > > > >Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml > >- <para>With this very useful feature, those users who are on > >+ <para>With this very feature, those users who are on > > Do we care more that it is this particular feature or that it is a > useful feature? ("With this very ..." does not seem particularly > consistent with our style.) 'With this very feature' can be understood also as 'with this specific feature' or 'with precisely this feature', so it's syntactically correct. It _is_ a bit confusing though as a diff/change, so I'd probably prefer the simpler 'With this feature' too.
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